I can start talking about an Italian trilogy written by Federico Moccia: the first one is "tThree mMeters aAbove the sSky" and the second one is "I dDesire yYou" (the third I have never redead). I can start talking about an Italian trilogy written by Federico Moccia: the first one is "Three Meters Above the Sky" and the second one is "I Desire You" (the third I have never read).

Titles of books most of the words will have a capital letter.

I can start talking about an Italian trilogy written by Federico Moccia: the first one is "tThree mMeters above the sSky" and the second one is "I dDesire yYou", (the third, I have never reded)n't read. I can start talking about an Italian trilogy written by Federico Moccia: the first one is "Three Meters above the Sky" and the second one is "I Desire You", the third, I haven't read.

Correct grammatically but it would feel more natural to start with something like 'I would like to start by talking about'

"Three mMeters aAbove the sSky" talks about the teenage relationship between Baby and Step, they live in Rome and their lives are toovery different. "Three Meters Above the Sky" talks about the teenage relationship between Baby and Step, they live in Rome and their lives are very different.

"too different" sounds like the are "too different" for a specific situation.

"Three mMeters above the sSky" talks about the teenage relationship between Baby and Step, they live in Rome and their lives are toso different. "Three Meters above the Sky" talks about the teenage relationship between Baby and Step, they live in Rome and their lives are so different.

so sounds a little more natural than too

She likes studying, being fashionable and she is responsabible. She likes studying, being fashionable and she is responsible.

She likes studying, being fashionable and she is responsabible. She likes studying, being fashionable and she is responsible.

Correct but it would be better to start this sentence with the name rather than she.

Also, tThe story also talks about the social classes differences, friendship, the first loves, and different life problems. The story also talks about social class differences, friendship, first loves, and different life problems.

Also, the story talks about the social classes differences, friendship, the first love, and different life problems. Also, the story talks about social classes differences, friendship, first love, and different life problems.

Correct, but it would flow a little better if you changed it around to 'Also, the story talks about the differences between the social classes,'

The book was published in 1992, and it was toovery successful and f. For this reason it was made into a film. The book was published in 1992, and it was very successful. For this reason it was made into a film.

'very' rather than 'too'. having two 'ands' in the sentence makes it harder to read.

The first book was published in 1992, and it was toso successful and for this reason it was made into a film. The first book was published in 1992, and it was so successful and for this reason it was made into a film.

Again 'so' is better here as it has a positive feeling whereas 'too' feels a little negative

Talking about "Sei Tu" (published in 2006), the second book, is the continuation of the story. "Sei Tu" (published in 2006), the second book, is the continuation of the story.

'talking about' sounds odd with 'is the continuation'. So, I don't think it needs to be there. Is "I desire you" or "Sei Tu" the second book of the trilogy?

Talking about "Sei Tu" (published in 2006), which is the second book, is the continuation of the story. "Sei Tu" (published in 2006), which is the second book, is the continuation of the story.

In the beginning, Step is in New York and he wants to return to Rome. In the beginning, Step is in New York and he wants to return to Rome.

In a momeAt one point of the story, Step meets Baby inat a party and they have a little affair, but he regrets this situation, and tells Gin what happened. At one point of the story, Step meets Baby at a party and they have a little affair, but he regrets this situation, and tells Gin what happened.

In a momenpart of the story, Step meets Baby in a party and they have a little affair, but he regrets this situation, and tells Gin what happened. In a part of the story, Step meets Baby in a party and they have a little affair, but he regrets this situation, and tells Gin what happened.

She doesn't forgive him, andbut he wants to win her back. She doesn't forgive him, but he wants to win her back.

to me 'but' feels better than and to emphasis the contrast.

She doesn't forgive him, andbut he wants to win her back. She doesn't forgive him, but he wants to win her back.

'but' feels more natural here

In my opinion, its a nice book for teenangers Also t There is also a film based on this book. In my opinion, its a nice book for teenagers There is also a film based on this book.

In my opinion, it's a nice book for teenangers Also there is a film based on this book. In my opinion, it's a nice book for teenagers Also there is a film based on this book.

I recommend them! I recommend them!