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Last night, my students were so noise that I could hear them even though I was in the classroom nearby. I warned them that if they were noise one more time, they would be punished for running 10 rounds. It seemed nobody cared, because when I just went in the other classroom, I heard them again. So I came back and nominated three boys to run tomorrow.
Today, after they running in a group, I asked the boys to run. I put on my earphone and listened to music when I was couting their rounds. It was cool and sunny. I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot. Several songs are old fashion? I wasn't sure, but the instruments are really good. I felt like I had my little own world which was separated from the students.
Tonight, I was reading at dusk. I suddenly want to hear the song "the stars under the sun" (阳光下的星星) which I liked a lot when I was in college. I think the best moment to listen to it was at winter dusk through the campus radio. It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the dusk which was also a little sad. However, I heard several times tonight, I didn't feel any sad. On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybe a little pleasant. I was so surprised. Maybe I became more mature or number than before. I heard the song "the wind of summer night" (夏夜晚风) from different singers, I think all of them are good. Maybe just as a comment said, "it is so good that nobody will ruin the song." I also heard a Cantonese song "blessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought me to a small town which was dramatic. Coincidently, there were someone who was listening the old Cantonese songs which were older than me.
When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and it works most of time. Thanks to music, it provide me a wodenful world. I still can remember a dialogue from a Taiwan movie, "music is the sense of security of hearing," I can't agree more.

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It was cool and sunny.

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Oct. 30, 2021

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I heard the song "the windlistened to a few different covers of s"Summer nNight Wind" (夏夜晚风) from different singers,; I think all of them are good.

I don't know which ones you've listened to, but of the ones I've listened to: Layton Wu > Wu Bai >>> deca joins. Of Wu Bai's songs, I think "Last Dance" is still my favorite.

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CoincidentFunnily, there weare someonpeople who was listening the old to Cantonese songs which wereare much older than I ame.

If you're talking about a specific person you saw, let me know, otherwise my correction is right.

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I still can remember a line of dialogue from a Taiwanese movie,: "music is the sense of security of hearing,." I caouldn't agree more.

Can you give me the quote? Sounds a little weird as you've written it.

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you can hear the cover of 杨英格, I think it is also wonderful. Wu Bai made an album whose name is "五朵金花" to Karen Mo(莫文蔚), it is really good! But some songs are Cantonese, maybe you need to see the lyrics while listening.

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音乐是听觉上的安全感。--《单车环岛日记》

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I don't know the guy. The sound came outside nearby.

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Oct. 31, 2021

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I tried to find his version but I couldn't find one without like, game show host commentary over the music, haha. I'll check that wu bai album out!

I was so surprised.


I was so surprised. I was surprised.

I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot.


I was listening the new album of Fool & Idiot album. I was listening the new Fool & Idiot album.

Maybe I became more mature or number than before.


Maybe IPerhaps I had becaome more mature, or more number, than before. Perhaps I had become more mature, or more numb, than before.

"Number" looks too much like number (123) haha, this way you also reduplicate "more"

Music


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Last night, my students were so noise that I could hear them even though I was in the classroom nearby.


Last night, my students were so noisey that I could hear them even though I was in thea classroom nearby. Last night, my students were so noisy that I could hear them even though I was in a classroom.

I warned them that if they were noise one more time, they would be punished for running 10 rounds.


I warned them that if they weremade too much noise one more time, theyI would be punished for running 10 them by making them round 10 laps. I warned them that if they made too much noise one more time, I would punish them by making them run 10 laps.

It seemed nobody cared, because when I just went in the other classroom, I heard them again.


It seemed that nobody cared, because when I just, as soon as I went in the other classroom, I heard them again. It seemed that nobody cared, because, as soon as I went in the other classroom, I heard them again.

"as soon as..., ..." is a good analog for 一...就...

So I came back and nominated three boys to run tomorrow.


So, I camewent back and nominated"volunteered" three boys to run tomorrow. So, I went back and "volunteered" three boys to run tomorrow.

Today, after they running in a group, I asked the boys to run.


Today, after they running in students ran as a group, I asked the boys to run some more separately. Today, after the students ran as a group, I asked the boys to run some more separately.

I put on my earphone and listened to music when I was couting their rounds.


I put oin my earphones and listened to music when I was coutingas I counted their roundlaps. I put in my earphones and listened to music as I counted their laps.

It was cool and sunny.


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Several songs are old fashion?


Several songs are very...old -fashioned? Several songs are very...old-fashioned?

I wasn't sure, but the instruments are really good.


I wasn''m not sure, but the instruments awere really good regardless. I'm not sure, but the instruments were really good regardless.

I felt like I had my little own world which was separated from the students.


I felt like I hadwas in my little own world. which was separated from the students. I felt like I was in my little own world. which was separated from the students.

Tonight, I was reading at dusk.


Tonight, I was reading at duskdid some reading. Tonight, I did some reading.

Adding "at dusk" is redundant.

I suddenly want to hear the song "the stars under the sun" (阳光下的星星) which I liked a lot when I was in college.


I suddenly wantfelt the urge to hear the song "tThe sStars uUnder the sSun" (阳光下的星星), which I liked a lot when I was in college. I suddenly felt the urge to hear the song "The Stars Under the Sun" (阳光下的星星), which I liked a lot when I was in college.

I think the best moment to listen to it was at winter dusk through the campus radio.


I think the best momentway to listen to it wais at dusk in winter dusk, through the campus radio. I think the best way to listen to it is at dusk in winter, through the campus radio.

It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the dusk which was also a little sad.


It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the duskevening, which was also a little sad. It was a little sad, so it was quite suitable for the evening, which was also a little sad.

I love this sentence

However, I heard several times tonight, I didn't feel any sad.


However, I heardTonight, however, I listened to it several times tonight,, but I didn't feel any sadness. Tonight, however, I listened to it several times, but I didn't feel any sadness.

On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybe a little pleasant.


On the contrary, I was quite peaceful, or maybecalm, even a little pleasanthappy. On the contrary, I was quite calm, even a little happy.

I heard the song "the wind of summer night" (夏夜晚风) from different singers, I think all of them are good.


I heard the song "the windlistened to a few different covers of s"Summer nNight Wind" (夏夜晚风) from different singers,; I think all of them are good. I listened to a few different covers of "Summer Night Wind" (夏夜晚风); I think all of them are good.

I don't know which ones you've listened to, but of the ones I've listened to: Layton Wu > Wu Bai >>> deca joins. Of Wu Bai's songs, I think "Last Dance" is still my favorite.

Maybe just as a comment said, "it is so good that nobody will ruin the song."


Maybe just, as a comment said, "itI found online said, "this song is so good that, nobody willcan ruin ithe song." Maybe, as a comment I found online said, "this song is so good, nobody can ruin it."

I also heard a Cantonese song "blessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought me to a small town which was dramatic.


I also heardlistened to a Cantonese song, "bBlessing" (祝福--叶倩文), it brought. It transported me to a small town which was, and it felt very dramatic. I also listened to a Cantonese song, "Blessing" (祝福--叶倩文). It transported me to a small town, and it felt very dramatic.

I might be wrong, but hear vs listen is kind of like 听到 vs 听见. If you hear something, it just means that the sound reached your ears. When you listen to something, you are actively focusing on it. That's why sometimes people will say, "are you listening to me?!" to ask if the person they're talking to is paying attention.

Coincidently, there were someone who was listening the old Cantonese songs which were older than me.


CoincidentFunnily, there weare someonpeople who was listening the old to Cantonese songs which wereare much older than I ame. Funnily, there are people who listen to Cantonese songs which are much older than I am.

If you're talking about a specific person you saw, let me know, otherwise my correction is right.

When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and it works most of time.


When I feel uncomfortable, I will listen to music to distract my pain, and ie from the feeling. It works most of time. When I feel uncomfortable, I listen to music to distract me from the feeling. It works most of time.

Thanks to music, it provide me a wodenful world.


Thanks to music, it provide meI can escape into a wondenrful world. Thanks to music, I can escape into a wonderful world.

I still can remember a dialogue from a Taiwan movie, "music is the sense of security of hearing," I can't agree more.


I still can remember a line of dialogue from a Taiwanese movie,: "music is the sense of security of hearing,." I caouldn't agree more. I still can remember a line of dialogue from a Taiwanese movie: "music is the sense of security of hearing." I couldn't agree more.

Can you give me the quote? Sounds a little weird as you've written it.

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