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Nostalgia!

Have you ever felt this feeling? As an adult I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory. However, sometimes the more I dig out this vague memory, the more I realise that I actually hated living it at that time!
Nostalgia can be such a complex feeling — my past self could have hated living an event, whereas my present self can cherish its memory. Even more weird, although I have realised this contradiction, I still keep going to feel nostalgic. Am I crazy? Are there other people inside my head?
After thinking a little bit about that question, the idea doesn’t seem so crazy. First, I was a child; then a teenager; then a young adult; and so on, until I reached my forties. Memories of all these past selves keep going to live within my mind, at least until I am able to remember something of them. Thus, when I catch an old memory wandering in my mind, I rediscover it from a fresh perspective.
Perhaps that is what we call experience — the ability to analyse memories of previous versions of ourselves, and, above all, to learn new things from them.

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Have you ever felthad this feeling?

As an adult, I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory.

However, sometimes the more I dig think about thise vague memory, the more that I realisze that I actually hated living it at that time!

Nostalgia can be such a complex feeling — my past self could have hated livexperiencing an event, whereas my present self can cherish its memory.

Even more weirdusual, although I have realiszed this contradiction, I still keep goreturning to feel nostalgic.the memory.

First, I was a child; then a teenager; then a young adult; and so on, until I reached my forties.

Nostalgia!

Have you ever felt this feeling?

As an adult I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory.

However, sometimes, the more I dig outinto this vague memory, the more I realise that I actually hated living it at that timethe time I had back then!

Nostalgia can be such a complex feeling — my past self could have hated livexperiencing an event, whereas my present self can cherish itsthe memory.

Even more weirder, although I have realised this contradiction, I still keep goingwant to feel nostalgic.

Am I crazy?

Are there other people inside my head?

After thinking a little bit about that question, the idea doesn’t seemound so crazy.

First, I was a child; then a teenager; then a young adult; and so on, until I reached my forties.

Memories of all these past selves keep goingcontinue to live within my mind, at least until I am able to remember something ofrom them.

Thus, when I catch an old memory wandering in my mind, I rediscover it from a fresh perspective.

Perhaps that is what we call experience — the ability to analyse memories of previous versions of ourselves, and, above all, to learn new things from them.

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Very poetic. :)

As an adult, I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory.

It was correct but needed a comma to put a pause.

However, sometimes the more I dig out this vague memory, the more I realise that I actually hated livexperiencing it at thate time!

Even more weirdWhat's weirder is that, although I have realised this contradiction, I still keep goingcontinue to feel nostalgic.

Are there other people living inside my head?

ANow after thinking a little bit about that question, the idea doesn’t seem so crazy.

Memories of all these past selves keepare going to live within my mind, at least until I am able to remember something of them.

I'm confused about the end of the sentence. "At least until I am able to remember something of them"

Thus, when I catch an old memory wandering in my mind, I rediscoverview it from a freshnew perspective.

Perhaps thatis is what we call experience — the ability to analyse memories of the previous versions of ourselves, and, above all, to learn new things from them.

Feedback

All in all, it was well written. I often get lost in nostalgia, myself.

Nostalgia!


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Have you ever felt this feeling?


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Have you ever felthad this feeling?

As an adult I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory.


As an adult, I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory.

It was correct but needed a comma to put a pause.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As an adult, I can easily feel nostalgic about an old childhood memory.

However, sometimes the more I dig out this vague memory, the more I realise that I actually hated living it at that time!


However, sometimes the more I dig out this vague memory, the more I realise that I actually hated livexperiencing it at thate time!

However, sometimes, the more I dig outinto this vague memory, the more I realise that I actually hated living it at that timethe time I had back then!

However, sometimes the more I dig think about thise vague memory, the more that I realisze that I actually hated living it at that time!

Nostalgia can be such a complex feeling — my past self could have hated living an event, whereas my present self can cherish its memory.


Nostalgia can be such a complex feeling — my past self could have hated livexperiencing an event, whereas my present self can cherish itsthe memory.

Nostalgia can be such a complex feeling — my past self could have hated livexperiencing an event, whereas my present self can cherish its memory.

Even more weird, although I have realised this contradiction, I still keep going to feel nostalgic.


Even more weirdWhat's weirder is that, although I have realised this contradiction, I still keep goingcontinue to feel nostalgic.

Even more weirder, although I have realised this contradiction, I still keep goingwant to feel nostalgic.

Even more weirdusual, although I have realiszed this contradiction, I still keep goreturning to feel nostalgic.the memory.

Am I crazy?


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Are there other people inside my head?


Are there other people living inside my head?

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After thinking a little bit about that question, the idea doesn’t seem so crazy.


ANow after thinking a little bit about that question, the idea doesn’t seem so crazy.

After thinking a little bit about that question, the idea doesn’t seemound so crazy.

First, I was a child; then a teenager; then a young adult; and so on, until I reached my forties.


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First, I was a child; then a teenager; then a young adult; and so on, until I reached my forties.

Memories of all these past selves keep going to live within my mind, at least until I am able to remember something of them.


Memories of all these past selves keepare going to live within my mind, at least until I am able to remember something of them.

I'm confused about the end of the sentence. "At least until I am able to remember something of them"

Memories of all these past selves keep goingcontinue to live within my mind, at least until I am able to remember something ofrom them.

Thus, when I catch an old memory wandering in my mind, I rediscover it from a fresh perspective.


Thus, when I catch an old memory wandering in my mind, I rediscoverview it from a freshnew perspective.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Perhaps that is what we call experience — the ability to analyse memories of previous versions of ourselves, and, above all, to learn new things from them.


Perhaps thatis is what we call experience — the ability to analyse memories of the previous versions of ourselves, and, above all, to learn new things from them.

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