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I made it so it has correct title capitalization.

This is the old discussion about work with what makes you happy against onlyhaving a securitye job. This is the old discussion about work with what makes you happy against having a secure job.

There's an old discussion point about work with wing somewhere that makes you happy against onlyrather than just a securitye job. There's an old discussion point about working somewhere that makes you happy rather than just a secure job.

Thisese different points of view show us generally different social, cultural, and economic contests what set the head of the people in time to make thefactors which influence people's decision. These different points of view show us generally different social, cultural, and economic factors which influence people's decision.

I'm not sure what you meant by "contests", but changed to "factors" to express different things that can impact a decision.

Thisese different points of view show us generally different social, cultural, and economic contests wthat set the head of the people indirect people when it's time to make the decision. These different points of view show us generally different social, cultural, and economic contests that direct people when it's time to make the decision.

Coming from a less currence money familyfamily with less money, Coming from a family with less money,

Coming from a less currence moneyfinancially well-off family, Coming from a less financially well-off family,

I agreed more with the second group but also can understand the reasons of the first affirmation. I agree more with the second group but also can understand the reasons of the first.

Changed "agreed" to present tense, assuming you still agree with this statement.

I agreed more with the second group, but I also can understand the reasons ofor the first affirmationgroup. I agree more with the second group, but I also can understand the reasons for the first group.

To justify the choosiness of job satisfactionfinding a fulfilling job there is always one strong argument. To justify the choosiness of finding a fulfilling job there is always one strong argument.

"job satisfaction" is also correct, but the real "choosiness" describes the search to find a fulfilling job, not usually the "job satisfaction" itself.

To justify thebeing choosiness ofy in regards to job satisfaction, there's always one strong argument. To justify being choosy in regards to job satisfaction, there's always one strong argument.

People say that following this path can help one avoid future health problems. People say that following this path can help one avoid future health problems.

Let’s imagine someone that chooses a career in financiale instead art scenicof becoming an artist. Let’s imagine someone that chooses a career in finance instead of becoming an artist.

Not sure what "art scenic" means, guessing being an artist?

Let’s imagine someone that chooses financial insteades over the art scenice. Let’s imagine someone that chooses finances over the art scene.

Yes, he can be realizsatisfied financially speaking, and have a stable life. Yes, he can be satisfied financially speaking, and have a stable life.

"realized" is a bit more formal, and is used more for "realizing a dream" rather than be generally content.

Yes, he can be realizedsuccessful financially speaking, haveing a stable life. Yes, he can be successful financially speaking, having a stable life.

However, in the how time passes, and he becomes older. However, time passes, and he becomes older.

However, in the howas time pass, andes, he becomes older. However, as time passes, he becomes older.

He can feel empety inside, like something's missing. He can feel empty inside, like something's missing.

He canfeels empety inside, like there's something missing. He feels empty inside, like there's something missing.

It canHe could develop depression and another health problems. He could develop depression and other health problems.

It can develop into depression and another health problems. It can develop into depression and other health problems.

Otherwise, if his passion is followede follows his passion, he can be more realizsatisfied, happy, and it can increase the quality of theirhis personal relationships. Otherwise, if he follows his passion, he can be more satisfied, happy, and it can increase the quality of his personal relationships.

Otherwise, if his passion is followed, he can be more realized,n the other hand, if he had followed his passions, he could feel more fulfilled and happy, it can increaseing the quality of theirhis personal relationships. On the other hand, if he had followed his passions, he could feel more fulfilled and happy, increasing the quality of his personal relationships.

Nowadays with the world is completely globalized and with the economic systems are totally connected f. Furthermore, considering the increasing of international tensions, people can’t give hithemselfves the luxury to choose jobs that are more satisfaction toying to their personal life instead of being secure. Nowadays the world is completely globalized and the economic systems are totally connected. Furthermore, considering the increasing international tensions, people can’t give themselves the luxury to choose jobs that are more satisfying to their personal life instead of being secure.

Nowadays, with the world being completely globalized and with thwhere economic systems are totally connected, furthermore considering the increasing of international tensions, people can’t give hithemselfves the luxury tof chooseing jobs that are more satisfaction to personal life insteadpersonally satisfying than secure. Nowadays, with the world being completely globalized where economic systems are totally connected, furthermore considering the increasing of international tensions, people can’t give themselves the luxury of choosing jobs that are more personally satisfying than secure.

Especially considering those that caome from the poorest families and in the majority times areare often carrying the weight of the world ion their shoulders to help their families. Especially considering those that come from the poorest families and are often carrying the weight of the world on their shoulders to help their families.

Especially considering those that caome from the poorest families and in the majority timof cases are carrying the weight of the world ion their shoulders to help their families. Especially considering those that come from the poorest families in the majority of cases are carrying the weight of the world on their shoulders to help their families.

This can also be noticed in cases when someone choose to work as a software developer instead of as a musician even thatough the secondlatter is his passion. This can also be noticed in cases when someone choose to work as a software developer instead of as a musician even though the latter is his passion.

"second" is fine too, but "latter" in my opinion flows better, especially since your text is quite formal.

This can also be noticed in cases whenre someone choose to work as a software developer instead of as a musician even thatough the second is his passion. This can also be noticed in cases where someone choose to work as a software developer instead of as a musician even though the second is his passion.

In the real world the probability to have successed or even just woearn a real salary as a musician is way smaller than that in software technology. In the real world the probability to succeed or even just earn a real salary as a musician is way smaller than that in software.

In the real world, the probability tof haveing success or even just won a real salary as a musician is way smaller than software technologydevelopment. In the real world, the probability of having success or even just a real salary as a musician is way smaller than software development.

It's clear that some heath problems can be develop in the life of those that choose security instead satisfaction. It's clear that some heath problems can be develop in the life of those that choose security instead satisfaction.

It is clear that some heath problems can be develop in the life of those that choose security instead of satisfaction. It is clear that some heath problems can develop in the life of those that choose security instead of satisfaction.

Although, this can be avoided with one attitude. Although, this can be avoided with one attitude.

Although, this can be avoided with onea certain attitude. Although, this can be avoided with a certain attitude.

People can work in securitye jobs just for one period of their lives. People can work in secure jobs just for one period of their lives.

People can just work inat securitye jobs just for one period of their lives. People can just work at secure jobs for one period of their lives.

They don’t need to work in thisese jobs tofor the rest of their lives. They don’t need to work in these jobs for the rest of their lives.

They don’t need to work inat thisese jobs tofor the rest of their lives. They don’t need to work at these jobs for the rest of their lives.

They can also build one stable life, a good fineancial reservfoundation and themn change their jobs. They can also build one stable life, a good financial foundation and then change jobs.

They can also build onea stable life, a good fineancial reservatione, and themn change their jobs. They can build a stable life, a good financial reserve, and then change their jobs.

But its only possible because they worked a certain period of their lives in/at a securitye job. But its only possible because they worked a certain period of their lives in/at a secure job.

But it's only possible because they worked a certain period of their lives inat a securitye job. But it's only possible because they worked a certain period of their lives at a secure job.

The modern society is too cruel nowadays to sorrallow mistakes and give a second chances. The modern society is too cruel nowadays to allow mistakes and give second chances.

Not sure what you mean by "sorrow", which is the same thing as "sadness" - maybe "allow mistakes" would be better.

The mModern society is tso cruel nowadays to sorrowpunish mistakes and not give a second chances. Modern society is so cruel nowadays to punish mistakes and not give second chances.

I'm not sure what you were trying to say here.