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Sept. 17, 2022

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[Translation] Tons of snapshots stored in a photo album

I've organized a lot of snapshots piled on the closet or bookshelf for decades. Their large amount just stunned me - ones from the family trips we went for when our kids were small or ones of bathing in a lake when we returned home, etc. I was impressed by how many family photos we had taken. These photos include ones of some trees in the garden and home garden.

Four years ago, I lost my "shutterbug" husband. Since then, I've been reluctant to work on them for a while. When I got a small file-type album, I decided to fine-select good photos from those huge stocks and put them chronologically.

During the process, mumbling, "Why am I doing this in an outdated manner? Now is the time when you can store photos on smartphones or photoshop them. Wait, how I'm doing this must be important," I worked up a 40-page album.

I indexed the album, which starts with a photo from 1972 when I started working. Turing a page in this small book gets me back instantly to when our family shared a big smile. This album is my treasure.

The photo of my husband in the living room also smiles back at me. Today, to what year I'll go back?

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Sept. 19, 2022

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I was impressed by how many family photos we had taken.

Four years ago, I lost my "shutterbug" husband.

This album is my treasure.

The photo of my husband in the living room also smiles back at me.

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Sept. 18, 2022

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[Translation] Tons of snapshots stored in a photo album


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[Translation] Tons of sSnapshots sStored in a pPhoto aAlbum [Translation] Tons of Snapshots Stored in a Photo Album

I've organized a lot of snapshots piled on the closet or bookshelf for decades.


I've organized a lot of snapshots, pileding them on the closet or bookshelf for decades. I've organized a lot of snapshots, piling them on the closet or bookshelf for decades.

I've organized a lot of snapshots piled on thein closets or bookshelfves for decades. I've organized a lot of snapshots piled in closets or bookshelves for decades.

Their large amount just stunned me - ones from the family trips we went for when our kids were small or ones of bathing in a lake when we returned home, etc.


Their large amount just stunned me - ones from the family trips we went foron when our kids were small or ones of bathing in a lake when we returned home, etc. Their large amount just stunned me - ones from the family trips we went on when our kids were small or ones of bathing in a lake when we returned home, etc.

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Their large sheer amount just stunned me - ones from the family trips we went for when our kids were small or ones of bathing in a lake when we returned home, etc. The sheer amount just stunned me - ones from the family trips we went for when our kids were small or ones of bathing in a lake when we returned home, etc.

I was impressed by how many family photos we had taken.


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These photos include ones of some trees in the garden and home garden.


These photos include ones of some trees in thea public garden and our home garden. These photos include trees in a public garden and our home garden.

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These photos include ones of some trees in the garden and home gardens. These photos include ones of some trees in the gardens.

Four years ago, I lost my "shutterbug" husband.


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Since then, I've been reluctant to work on them for a while.


Since then, I've been reluctant to work on them for a whilsome time. Since then, I've been reluctant to work on them for some time.

Since then, I've been reluctant to work on them photos for a while. Since then, I've been reluctant to work on the photos for a while.

When I got a small file-type album, I decided to fine-select good photos from those huge stocks and put them chronologically.


When I got a small file-type album, I decided to fine-carefully select good photos from those huge stocks and putorder them chronologically. When I got a small file-type album, I decided to carefully select good photos from those huge stocks and order them chronologically.

When I got a small file-type album, I decided to fine-selecturther narrow down the good photos from those huge stoacks and putorder them chronologically. When I got a small file-type album, I decided to further narrow down the good photos from the huge stacks and order them chronologically.

When I got a small file-type album, I decided to fine-select some good photos from those huge stoacks and putorder them chronologically. When I got a small file-type album, I decided to select some good photos from those huge stacks and order them chronologically.

During the process, mumbling, "Why am I doing this in an outdated manner?


During the process, I was mumbling, "Why am I doing this in an outdated manner? During the process I was mumbling, "Why am I doing this in an outdated manner?

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During the process, I found myself mumbling, "Why am I doing this in an outdated manner? During the process, I found myself mumbling, "Why am I doing this in an outdated manner?

Now is the time when you can store photos on smartphones or photoshop them.


Now is the time whenadays you can store photos on smartphones or photoshop them. Nowadays you can store photos on smartphones or photoshop them.

Now is the time when youwe can store photos on smartphones or even photoshop them. Now we can store photos on smartphones or even photoshop them.

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Wait, how I'm doing this must be important," I worked up a 40-page album.


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"Wait, how I'm doing this must be important," I worked upsaid, as I put together a 40-page album. "Wait, how I'm doing this must be important," I said, as I put together a 40-page album.

I indexed the album, which starts with a photo from 1972 when I started working.


I indexed the album, which starts with a photo from 1972 when- the year I started working. I indexed the album, which starts with a photo from 1972 - the year I started working.

I indexed the album, which starts with a photo from 1972 which is when I started working. I indexed the album, which starts with a photo from 1972 which is when I started working.

I indexed the album, which startbegins with a photo from 1972 when I started working in 1972. I indexed the album, which begins with a photo from when I started working in 1972.

Turing a page in this small book gets me back instantly to when our family shared a big smile.


Turing a page in this small book getbrings me back instantly to when our family shared a big smile. Turing a page in this small book brings me back instantly to when our family shared a big smile.

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Turing a page in this small book getbrings me back instantly to when our family shared a big smiles together. Turing a page in this small book brings me back instantly to when our family shared big smiles together.

This album is my treasure.


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This album is my treasure. This album is my treasure.

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The photo of my husband in the living room also smiles back at me.


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Today, to what year I'll go back?


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