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Recently, I start to play a mobile game, in this game have a lot of options for spent money in shop, but they are all expensive.
I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game, I start in a new server that have launch in a fow hours and I see players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars in yours characters, and there are tens of hundreds of servers, almost a new one every day, so I think, who are this peoples? Where do they come from? What do they do for a living?

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I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game, I start in a new server that have launch in a fow hours and I see players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars in yours characters, and there are tens of hundreds of servers, almost a new one every day, so I think, who are this peoples?


I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game,. I started in a new server (that have launch ind only been launched for a few hours/that had only launched a foew hours ago) and I see players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars ion yourstheir characters, and there are tens of hundrehousands of servers, almost a new one every day, so I think, who are thisese peoples? I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game. I started in a new server (that had only been launched for a few hours/that had only launched a few hours ago) and I see players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars on their characters, and there are thousands of servers, almost a new one every day, so I think, who are these people?

"yours" is a very specific phrase in most forms of English, and it means "your family members and loved ones". It's only used in a few contexts. "peoples" similarly is a niche word. "people" is already the plural of person. "peoples" is used for talking about societies or cultures.

I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game,. I started in a new server that haves launch ined a foew hours ago and I see/saw players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars in yourstheir characters, and there are tens of hundreds of servers, almost a new one every day, so I think, who are thisese peoples? I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game. I started in a new server that has launched a few hours ago and I see/saw players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars in their characters, and there are tens of hundreds of servers, almost a new one every day, so I think, who are these people?

"I started" for the same reason mentioned above. "Has launched" because it is past tense once again. "HAVE launched" can be said if we are taking about multiple things. For example, "THEY have launched a new server". "In a few hours" implies that is something that is going to happen. But it seems like you are talking about something that already has happened. The word "people" is already implied plural in English.

I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game,. I started in a new server that haved launch ined only for a foew hours and I see players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars ion yourstheir characters, and t. There are tens of hundrehousands of servers, almost a new one every day, s. So I think, who are thisese peoples? I'm amazed that there are people with so much money to spend on a mobile game. I started in a new server that had launched only for a few hours and I see players who had clearly spent over a thousand dollars on their characters. There are thousands of servers, almost a new one every day. So I think, who are these people?

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Recently, I start to play a mobile game, in this game have a lot of options for spent money in shop, but they are all expensive.


Recently, I started to play a mobile game, in this game havthere are a lot of options for spentding money in the shop, but they are all expensive. Recently, I started to play a mobile game, in this game there are a lot of options for spending money in the shop, but they are all expensive.

"I start" means that you regularly start, like "I start cleaning after dinner every day". For something like a habit that you've started, you'd use the past tense because the start point is in the past.

Recently, I started to play a mobile game, i. In this game I have a lot of options forto spentd money in the shop, but they are all expensive. Recently, I started to play a mobile game. In this game I have a lot of options to spend money in the shop, but they are all expensive.

For new things/habits that we start, we use past tense. In this case it sounds like the mobile game is a new habit that you started, so we should say "I started".

Recently, I started to play a new mobile game, i. In this game havthere are a lot of options forto spentd money in the shop, but they are all expensive. Recently, I started to play a new mobile game. In this game there are a lot of options to spend money in the shop, but they are all expensive.

"new" can always imply "new to me", like "I started to use a new hair product", even if the product is not "newly released".

Where do they come from?


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What do they do for a living?


What do they do for a living? What do they do for a living?

What I've heard before from people who have talked to people in the game companies is that these rich players are often from the finance industry, or e.g. involved in the oil industry in countries where that makes a small number of people a lot of money. However, there's also people who are like people who have gambling problems, except with video games, who spend that much money despite not really having it. It's why in a lot of countries in europe, there's talk every few years about limiting how much people can spend on those types of games.

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