Sept. 12, 2025
A memory of bread and butter
A few weeks ago, I celerbrated my sister's birthday. She booked a hotel nearby the river. In that morning, we have breakfast and as the strandard, there are toaster and bread on the buffet. I think it's very weird because she booked Thai-theme hotel next to river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for foreigner? then, make me think why would you want to eat same food as your hometown. Don't they come here to experience new thing? anyways, turn out you can dial the toaster. I learn the hard way after I burnt my toast.
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A few weeks ago, I celerbrated my sister's birthday.
She booked a hotel near by the river. She booked a hotel near by the river.
IOn that morning, we haved breakfast and as the. As strandard, there arewas a toaster and bread onat the buffet.
On that morning, we had breakfast. As standard, there was a toaster and bread at the buffet.
You're referring to a past event here. The tenses need to match.
I think it'ought it was very weird because she booked a Thai-theme hotel next to the river market, s. Shouldn't they have committed to the theme or m. Maybe these aren't meant for me but for foreigners?
I thought it was very weird because she booked a Thai-theme hotel next to the river market. Shouldn't they have committed to the theme. Maybe these aren't meant for me but for foreigners?
"Thai-theme hotel next to river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for foreigner?"
This sentence had multiple topics and ideas so, I think it's better to split them if you want to keep the entire explanation.
then,This makes me think, why would you want to eat the same food as your hometown.
This makes me think, why would you want to eat the same food as your hometown.
I assume we're back at the present and you're telling us about your present thoughts concerning the past event of your sister's birthday. So present tense is okay here and moving forward.
Don't they come here to experience new things? Don't they come here to experience new things?
aAnyways, turns out you can dial the toaster.
Anyways, turns out you can dial the toaster.
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Nice work
She booked a hotel nearby the river.
She booked a hotel near the river.
You can say "near the river" or "she booked a hotel. The river is nearby. "
In thate morning, we have breakfast and as the strandard, there areis a toaster and bread on the buffet.
In the morning, we have breakfast and as the standard, there is a toaster and bread on the buffet.
I think it's very weird because she booked a Thai-themed hotel next to the river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for a foreigner? I think it's very weird because she booked a Thai-themed hotel next to the river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for a foreigner?
tThen, this makes me think "why would you want to eat the same food as your hometown.".
Then, this makes me think "why would you want to eat the same food as your hometown".
Don't they come here to experience new things? Don't they come here to experience new things?
aAnyways, turns out you can dial the toaster.
Anyways, turns out you can dial the toaster.
I learned that the hard way after I burnt my toast. I learned that the hard way after I burnt my toast.
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Just a few suggestions about articles and tenses. Hopefully, the next time you make toast things will turn out better!
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I think it's very weird because she booked Thai-theme hotel next to river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for foreigner? I think it's very weird because she booked a Thai-themed hotel next to the river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for a foreigner? I think it's very weird because she booked a Thai-themed hotel next to the river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for a foreigner?
I th "Thai-theme hotel next to river market, shouldn't they commit to the theme or maybe these aren't meant for me but for foreigner?" This sentence had multiple topics and ideas so, I think it's better to split them if you want to keep the entire explanation. |
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Don't they come here to experience new thing? Don't they come here to experience new things? Don't they come here to experience new things? Don't they come here to experience new things? Don't they come here to experience new things? |
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anyways, turn out you can dial the toaster.
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A few weeks ago, I celerbrated my sister's birthday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She booked a hotel nearby the river.
She booked a hotel near You can say "near the river" or "she booked a hotel. The river is nearby. " She booked a hotel near by the river. She booked a hotel near by the river. |
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In that morning, we have breakfast and as the strandard, there are toaster and bread on the buffet.
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You're referring to a past event here. The tenses need to match. |
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then, make me think why would you want to eat same food as your hometown.
I assume we're back at the present and you're telling us about your present thoughts concerning the past event of your sister's birthday. So present tense is okay here and moving forward. |
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I learn the hard way after I burnt my toast. I learned that the hard way after I burnt my toast. I learned that the hard way after I burnt my toast. |
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