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alexwong2164

Feb. 28, 2023

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movie talk

Suzume

This movie have you watched?

To tell you how good this movie.

One of my friend’s daughter watch this movie three times.

Next month we can watch this movie in cinema.

I must watch too.

Yesterday, one of my friend give me the poster of this movie. (Free)

I hang the poster in my room and I feel kind of cool.

If my friend’s daughter can see that.

I think she will jealous me.

If you also watched this movie, do tell me your comments.

I don’t mind spoiler.

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We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

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This movie have you watched?


This movie hHave you watched this movie? Have you watched this movie?

When asking a yes no question, the verb is always at the front

This movie hHave you watched this movie, Suzume? Have you watched this movie, Suzume?

這樣說會更好的!

This movie hHave you watched this movie? Have you watched this movie?

To tell you how good this movie.


To tell you how good this movie is. To tell you how good this movie is.

To tell you about how good this movie. is, To tell you about how good this movie is,

To tell you how good this movie.

This was a sentence fragment.

One of my friend’s daughter watch this movie three times.


One of my friends' daughter has watched this movie three times. One of my friends' daughter has watched this movie three times.

You use the present perfect here because it's still continuing to this day

Oone of my friend’s daughter watched this movie three times. one of my friend’s daughter watched this movie three times.

This is in the past because it has already happened

One of my friend’s daughterTo let you know how good this movie is, the daughter of one of my friends watched this movie three times. To let you know how good this movie is, the daughter of one of my friends watched this movie three times.

Next month we can watch this movie in cinema.


Next month we can watch this movie inat the cinema. Next month we can watch this movie at the cinema.

We use "at" if we want to say to do something at the cinema, but "in" when we are actually inside the cinema theatre

Next month we canwill watch this movie in cinema. Next month we will watch this movie in cinema.

Both could be correct but this makes it sound more fluent

Next month we can watch this movie inat the cinema. Next month we can watch this movie at the cinema.

I must watch too.


I must watch it too. I must watch it too.

I must watch this movie/it too. I must watch this movie/it too.

I must watch it, too. I must watch it, too.

Yesterday, one of my friend give me the poster of this movie.


Yesterday, one of my friends giave me the poster of this movie. Yesterday, one of my friends gave me the poster of this movie.

If you use "one of the ..." the noun has to be in plural form because you are saying one of the many that you have (hopefully you have many friends) And also for describing past actions, you use the past tense (keyword for past tense: yesterday)

Yesterday, one of my friends giave me the poster ofor this movie. Yesterday, one of my friends gave me the poster for this movie.

Yesterday, one of my friends giave me the poster ofor this movie for free. Yesterday, one of my friends gave me the poster for this movie for free.

"Yesterday" is past tense.

(Free)


(Free)

(Free)

I hang the poster in my room and I feel kind of cool.


I haung the poster in my room and I feel kind of cool. I hung the poster in my room and I feel kind of cool.

Because you did this in the past, you have to use the past tense

I haung the poster in my room, and I feel kind of cool. I hung the poster in my room, and I feel cool.

Deleted the 'kind of' would make your language seem more confident!

I haung the poster in my room andso now I feel kind of cool. I hung the poster in my room so now I feel kind of cool.

If my friend’s daughter can see that.


If my friend’s daughter canould see that. If my friend’s daughter could see that.

This is the second conditional, for the first part, you have to use past tense, followed by the present conditional (e.g., would/wouldn't (followed by the base form))

If my friend’s daughter can see that. If my friend’s daughter can see that

No full stop otherwise it is a run-on sentence!!! 一定要小心!

If my friend’s daughter can see that.

I think she will jealous me.


I think she willould be jealous of me. I think she would be jealous of me.

This is what I said about the second conditional in the previous sentence Also, you can't be jealous me, you can only be jealous OF something

I think she willould be very jealous of me. I think she would be very jealous of me.

If my friend’s daughter could see it, I think she willould be jealous of me. If my friend’s daughter could see it, I think she would be jealous of me.

This is subjunctive tense since you're making a guess.

If you also watched this movie, do tell me your comments.


If you have also watched this movie, doplease tell me your commentsopinions on it. If you have also watched this movie, please tell me your opinions on it.

Make it more fluent

If you also watched thise movie, do tell me about your comments. If you also watched the movie, do tell me about your comments.

If you also watched this movie, please do tell me your commentswhat you thought of it. If you also watched this movie, please do tell me what you thought of it.

I don’t mind spoiler.


I don’t mind spoiler.s! I don’t mind spoilers!

I don’t mind spoilers. I don’t mind spoilers.

I don’t mind spoilers. I don’t mind spoilers.

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