May 24, 2021
Riding by Bicycle around Jeju Island
Ten years ago, my colleage friends and I visited Jeju Island for making our unique memories.
We planned to ride by bicycle around the island where is more than 240 km.
It took a week for many people to ride, but we tried to go around there for only three days.
Of cource, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I cound have many interesting memories.
I ate horse meat bulgogi for the first time.
I saw shooting stars while I was riding at midnight.
If I will have a chance, I will ride there again.
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Riding by Bicycle around Jeju Island
Ten years ago, my colleage friends and I visited Jeju Island for making our unique memorieson a memory-making trip.
Ten years ago, my collage friends and I visited Jeju Island on a memory-making trip.
We planned to ride by bicycles around the island, whereich is more than 240 km in circumference.
We planned to ride bicycles around the island, which is more than 240 km in circumference.
It tookakes a week for manyost people to complete the ride, but we tried to go around there forin only three days.
It takes a week for most people to complete the ride, but we tried to go around there in only three days.
Of courcse, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I cound havehad many interesting memories.
Of course, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I had many interesting memories.
I ate horse meat bulgogi for the first time.
I saw shooting stars while I was riding at midnight.
If I willever have athe chance, I will ride there again.
If I ever have the chance, I will ride there again.
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May 24, 2021
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Ten years ago, my colleage friends and I visited Jeju Island for making our unique memories.
Ten years ago, my coll |
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We planned to ride by bicycle around the island where is more than 240 km.
We planned to ride |
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It took a week for many people to ride, but we tried to go around there for only three days.
It t |
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Of cource, I was very tired by the end of the trip, but I cound have many interesting memories.
Of cour |
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I ate horse meat bulgogi for the first time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I saw shooting stars while I was riding at midnight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If I will have a chance, I will ride there again.
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