Nov. 24, 2025
Me and my husband
I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. After the quarrel, I didn't talk to him for a long time. Maybe he feel the bad atmosohere between us, he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play. Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday. We had a good time. Then we become good again.
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Maybe he feelt the bad atmosophere between us, because today he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
Maybe he felt the bad atmosphere between us, because today he prepared a surprise for me—two tickets for a play.
We don't double up em dashes (the long one). Sometimes people will double up hyphens (--) when typing on a computer to simulate an em dash, or just use a regular hyphen instead if it it's too difficult to type am em dash.
Also it's worth mentioning that em dashes have started to be seen as a "AI" thing as AI always uses them while most people don't bother, so that has hurt their popularity recently.
Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday.
Then he took me to see the play this Saturday.
Then we become goodmade up again.
Then we made up again.
"made up" is the phrase usually used for this kind of reconciliation.
Nov. 25, 2025
I agree with araigoshi that "made up" is a good correction, but you might not need "again" after it.
If you say "again" it could suggest that you fight and make up often.
A more formal expression that is similar to "we made up" is "we were reconciled."
"To make up" focuses on saying we are sorry or acknowledging something we did was wrong or hurtful.
"To reconcile" focuses on restoring harmony in our relationship.
Nov. 27, 2025
Thank you very much！
I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday.
Maybe he feel the bad atmosophere between us, because he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
Maybe he feel the bad atmosphere between us, because he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
- Minor spelling mistake with "atmosphere"
- Use "because" when writing about a cause and reason
Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday.
Then he took me to see the play this Saturday.
- You can use either "on Saturday" or "this Saturday", but preferably don't use both
- Minor spelling mistake with "Saturday"
Nov. 27, 2025
Thank you very much！
Maybe he feelt the bad atmosohere between us, but he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
Maybe he felt the bad atmosohere between us, but he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
Must be in pst tense since rest of the story is in past tense.
Maybe… but conjunction needed (FANBOYS connecting two indpendent clauses)
Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday.
Then he took me to see the play this Satureday.
No need for on since the word this is already there for the date
Then we become goodwere on good terms again.
Then we were on good terms again.
We became good again implies moral good not good relationship. I changed it so it fits the context
Nov. 24, 2025
Thank you for your correction~
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I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. I argued with my husband last week because he didn't prepare a gift for my birthday. |
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After the quarrel, I didn't talk to him for a long time. |
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Maybe he feel the bad atmosohere between us, he prepared a surprise for me——two tickets for a play.
Maybe he fe Must be in pst tense since rest of the story is in past tense. Maybe… but conjunction needed (FANBOYS connecting two indpendent clauses)
Maybe he feel the bad atmos - Minor spelling mistake with "atmosphere" - Use "because" when writing about a cause and reason
Maybe he fe We don't double up em dashes (the long one). Sometimes people will double up hyphens (--) when typing on a computer to simulate an em dash, or just use a regular hyphen instead if it it's too difficult to type am em dash. Also it's worth mentioning that em dashes have started to be seen as a "AI" thing as AI always uses them while most people don't bother, so that has hurt their popularity recently. |
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Then he took me to see the play on this Satureday.
Then he took me to see the play No need for on since the word this is already there for the date
Then he took me to see the play - You can use either "on Saturday" or "this Saturday", but preferably don't use both - Minor spelling mistake with "Saturday"
Then he took me to see the play |
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We had a good time. |
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Then we become good again.
Then we We became good again implies moral good not good relationship. I changed it so it fits the context
Then we "made up" is the phrase usually used for this kind of reconciliation. |
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