Youth's rRegrets Youth's Regrets

Alternative Title: "The Regrets of Youth" I like this one more, it sounds poetic, haha.

Youth's rRegrets Youth's Regrets

It is common to capitalize each word in a title.

Youth's regretsThe Regrets of Youth The Regrets of Youth

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles. This correction sounds more natural in the US.

When I was a boy, I grew up in a religious and overprotective family. When I was a boy, I grew up in a religious and overprotective family.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and, as a result, I spend my whole adolescence talking with a reduclimited amount of people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom. That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and, as a result, I spend my whole adolescence talking with a limited amount of people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

"Limited" seems a better word than "reduce." I would use "restricted" but you had "restrictions" earlier, so to avoid repitition I put "limited."

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result I spend my whole adolescence talking with a reduced amount of peoplmost of my teenage years not talking to anyone and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom. That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result I spend mmost of my teenage years not talking to anyone and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result I spend my whole adolescence talking with a reduced amountonly a limited number of people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom. That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result I spend my whole adolescence talking with only a limited number of people and playing videogames in my bedroom.

That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result, I spendt my whole adolescence talking with a reduced amount offew people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom. That means I had a lot of rules and restrictions, and as a result, I spent my whole adolescence talking with few people and mainly playing videogames in my bedroom.

But the first partbeginning of this year changed everything. But the beginning of this year changed everything.

"Beginning" is a more conicse way of saying "first part."

(But /) However, the first part of this year changed everything. (But /) However, the first part of this year changed everything.

But tThe first part of this year, however, changed everything. The first part of this year, however, changed everything.

The problem withis that is I'm in my latest 20's, and I think I don't have too much time to recover thoseany losst time. The problem is that I'm in my latest 20's, and I think I don't have too much time to recover any lost time.

The problem with that is I'm in my latest 20's, and I don’t think I don't have too much time to recover thosehave much longer to make up for losst time. The problem with that is I'm in my late 20's, and I don’t think I have much longer to make up for lost time.

The problem with that is I'm (already) in my latest 20's, and I don't think I don't have toohave much time left to recover those loss time(lost time / what time I lost). The problem with that is I'm (already) in my late 20's, and I don't think I have much time left to recover (lost time / what time I lost).

The problem with that is now I'm in my latest 20's, and I think that I don't have too much time to recover thosee earlier losst time. The problem with that is now I'm in my late 20's and I think that I don't have much time to recover the earlier lost time.

Dude, you're still very young.

I hareceived a scholarship to study abroad. I received a scholarship to study abroad.

You use the verb "receive" to say that you get a scholarship.

I hadgot a scholarship to study abroad. I got a scholarship to study abroad.

There, I met a lot of peple, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls,. In short, I lived. There, I met a lot of peple, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls. In short, I lived.

There I met a lot of people, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls,. In short I lived. There I met a lot of people, went to parties, traveled alone, ate with strange people and flirted with some girls. In short I lived.

There, I met a lot of people, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls, I(― / ;)in short, I lived. There, I met a lot of people, went to parties, traveled alone, ate with strange people, and flirted with some girls(― / ;)in short, I lived.

We use an em-dash or a semicolon to separate two sentences that are connected, but function independently.

There I met a lot of people, went to parties, travelled alone, ate with strange people,people I hadn't met before, and flirted with some girls,. In short, I lived. There I met a lot of people, went to parties, traveled alone, ate with people I hadn't met before, and flirted with some girls. In short, I lived.

That's why I'm planning to go abroad again induring/over a Wworking Hholiday and live my last years of youth without religius "restraints" or judgement from my family. That's why I'm planning to go abroad again during/over a working holiday and live my last years of youth without religius "restraints" or judgement from my family.

That's why I'm planning to go abroad again during a Working Holiday and live my last years of youth without religious "restraints" or judgement from my family. That's why I'm planning to go abroad again during a Working Holiday and live my last years of youth without religious "restraints" or judgement from my family.

That's why I'm planning to go abroad again ion a Wworking Hholiday so that I cand live mythe last years of my youth without religious "restraints" or judgement from my family. That's why I'm planning to go abroad again on a working holiday so that I can live the last years of my youth without religious "restraints" or judgement from my family.