Dec. 1, 2020
Day 4 Today was a regular day. I did not make many things entertaining but the weather was good. Now I studying more verbs in English for improve my vocabulary. Thanks for reading and correct me :).
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Dear Diary
This is a very minor correction, and if you continued using "Hi" you would be correct. However, the traditional phrase English speakers use at the start of a diary entry is "Dear Diary", so I thought it would be useful to let you know that.
I did not makedo many things entertaining things, but the weather was good.
I did not do many entertaining things, but the weather was good.
Now II am currently studying more verbs in English forto improve my vocabulary.
I am currently studying more verbs in English to improve my vocabulary.
Thanks for reading and correcting me :). Thanks for reading and correcting me :).
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Hi Diary
This is a very minor correction, and if you continued using "Hi" you would be correct. However, the traditional phrase English speakers use at the start of a diary entry is "Dear Diary", so I thought it would be useful to let you know that. |
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Day 4 Today was a regular day. |
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I did not make many things entertaining but the weather was good.
I did not |
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Now I studying more verbs in English for improve my vocabulary.
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Thanks for reading and correct me :). Thanks for reading and correcting me :). Thanks for reading and correcting me :). |
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