They kindly corrected my worsepoor English kindly. They kindly corrected my poor English.

They kindly corrected my worsepoor English kindly. They kindly corrected my poor English.

"Poor English" is a more common way to describe English that needs improvement, rather than "worse English." "Kindly corrected" sounds more natural than "corrected ... kindly."

They corrected my worsebad English kindly. They corrected my bad English kindly.

Worse is when you want to compare, “this is worse than that”

They kindly corrected my worsebad English kindly. They kindly corrected my bad English.

Put kindly near word it describes and you only need the basic adjective 'bad' not the comparative form 'worse'. You could also use 'terrible'.

I was glad because I could learn right andcorrect, useful English. I was glad because I could learn correct, useful English.

I was glad because I could learn rightproper and useful English. I was glad because I could learn proper and useful English.

"Proper" sounds more natural than "right" when referring to language usage.

I was glad because I could learn righcorrect and useful English. I was glad because I could learn correct and useful English.

I was glad because I could learn righcorrect and useful English. I was glad because I could learn correct and useful English.

I was glad because I could learn righcorrect and useful English. I was glad because I could learn correct and useful English.

'correct' not 'right'.

lLangcorrect Langcorrect

lLangcorrect Langcorrect

Make sure to capitalize the first letter of a word in your title.

lLangcorrect Langcorrect

Should start with a capital letter.

I’ve started using “Langcorrect” since two days ago. I started using “Langcorrect” two days ago.

I’ve started “using Langcorrect” since two days ago. I started using Langcorrect two days ago.

Use "I started" instead of "I’ve started" because you're referring to a specific time in the past ("two days ago"). "Since" isn't needed here, as "two days ago" already sets the time. "Using Langcorrect" makes it clearer that you're talking about the platform

I’ve started “Langcorrect” since two days ago. I’ve started “Langcorrect” two days ago.

I’ve started “Langcorrect” since two days ago. I’ve started “Langcorrect” two days ago.

I’ve started “Langcorrect” since two days ago. I started “Langcorrect” two days ago.

'simple tense' - statement of fact, completed, past. Do not need 'since' and since would go with a date not an amount of time.

I made many mistakes but the people who correct sentences were so kind. I made many mistakes but the people who correct sentences were so kind.

I made many mistakes, but the people who corrected my sentences were so kind. I made many mistakes, but the people who corrected my sentences were so kind.

Added a comma after "mistakes" for clarity. "Corrected my sentences" sounds more natural than "correct sentences."

I’ve made many mistakes but people who corrected sentences were so kind. I’ve made many mistakes but people who corrected sentences were so kind.

I made many mistakes but the people who corrected my sentences were so kind. I made many mistakes but the people who corrected my sentences were so kind.

I made many mistakes but the people who corrected the sentences were so kind. I made many mistakes but the people who corrected the sentences were so kind.

Specific group of people to definite article. Past tense of corrected. Specific set of 'sentences' so definite article needed.

Sometimes, I find other people’s worsepoor Japanese sentences.However I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese may be even worse. Sometimes, I find other people’s poor Japanese sentences.However I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese may be even worse.

Sometimes, I find other people’s worseincorrect Japanese sentences. However, I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese mayight be worse. Sometimes, I find other people’s incorrect Japanese sentences. However, I can’t correct them because I’m afraid my Japanese might be worse.

"Incorrect" works better than "worse" when describing language mistakes. Added a comma after "however" for correct punctuation. "Might" is often used when talking about possibilities, like the potential for your Japanese to be worse.

Sometimes, I find other people’s worsebad Japanese sentences. However, I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese may be worse. Sometimes, I find other people’s bad Japanese sentences. However, I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese may be worse.

Sometimes, I find other people’s worse Japanese sentences. terrible. However, I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese may be worse. Sometimes, I find other people’s Japanese sentences terrible. However, I can’t correct them because I’m afraid that my Japanese may be worse.

ThenStill, I will try as hard as possibleI can. Still, I will try as hard as I can.

ThenBut I will try as hard as possible. But I will try as hard as possible.

"But" works better here as it contrasts with the previous thought.

ThenStill, I will try as hard as possible. Still, I will try as hard as possible.