Aug. 13, 2020
Procrastination
Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate a way too much, and each one of them handles it differently. Some are even indolent—they just don't care; they coast through life without much worrying. Not everyone is impeccable; we all have bad days. We need to keep in mind that there's nothing wrong about taking a break—there's a difference between resting and procrastinating.
If you keep diligent, you will feel the joy of attaining your goals; otherwise, you might feel despondent about never reaching your objectives in your life. Keep doing what you have to, and you will certainly enjoy the elated feeling afterwards.
Even though I try to keep procrastination to a minimum, I too find myself as a victim from time to time. It usually takes a form of watching movies, TV shows, or videos on YouTube. But how can one subdue this inclination to procrastinate? To avoid it, I try to steer my thoughts to a different direction, to something I enjoy, such as learning English. I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I should be probably working on my thesis. Nevertheless, I need to be proficient in writing, given that I decided to write the thesis in English.
I used a couple of words I learned in the past week, so keep special attention to them. It might not feel right, as I don't have the natural feeling for their use-cases yet.
Those words are: indolent, coast, impeccable, diligent, attain, despondent, elated, subdue, inclination
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Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate a way too much, and each one of them handles it differently.
Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate way too much, and each one of them handles it differently.
If you keepremain diligent, you will feel the joy of attaining your goals; otherwise, you might feel despondent about never reaching your objectives in your life.
If you remain diligent, you will feel the joy of attaining your goals; otherwise, you might feel despondent about never reaching your objectives in your life.
It usually takes a formconsists of watching movies, TV shows, or videos on YouTube.
It usually consists of watching movies, TV shows, or videos on YouTube.
I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I probably should be probably working on my thesis.
I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I probably should be working on my thesis.
"Should be" is the predicate, and "probably" is an adverb.
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You seem quite proficient already, good job!
Aug. 14, 2020
Thanks for the correction!
I'm wondering whether the "probably" shouldn't be between the words "should" and "be", according to https://www.google.cz/amp/s/dictionary.cambridge.org/amp/british-grammar/adverbs-and-adverb-phrases-position?espv=1.
What do you think?
Aug. 14, 2020
True, I reckon both are correct but I won't argue against Cambridge.
Procrastination
Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate a way too much, and each one of them handles it differently.
Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate way too much, and each one of them handles it differently.
Some are even indolent—they just don't care; they coast through life without much worrying much.
Some are even indolent—they just don't care; they coast through life without worrying much.
The way you wrote it was great, my correction is to just show another way which you can say this,
Not everyone is impeccable;flawless we all have bad days.
Not everyone is flawless we all have bad days.
A more natural way to say this, typically people aren't described as "impeccable" but it still makes perfect sense. This is just another way it could be said.
We need to keep in mind that there's nothing wrong about taking a break—there's a difference between resting and procrastinating.
If you keepremain/stay diligent, you will feel the joy of attaining your goals; otherwise, you might feel despondent about never reaching your objectives in your life.
If you remain/stay diligent, you will feel the joy of attaining your goals; otherwise, you might feel despondent about never reaching your objectives in your life.
Keep doing what you have to, and you will certainly enjoy the elated feeling afterwards.
Even though I try to keep procrastination to a minimum, I too find myself as a victim to it from time to time.
Even though I try to keep procrastination to a minimum, I too find myself victim to it from time to time.
Again, the way you wrote it was perfect, I'm just giving another example as to how it could be said.
It usually takes aplace in the form of watching movies, TV shows, or videos on YouTube.
It usually takes place in the form of watching movies, TV shows, or videos on YouTube.
But how can one subdue this inclination to procrastinate?
To avoid it, I try to steer my thoughts to a different direction, to something I enjoy, such as learning English.
I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I probably should be probably working on my thesis.
I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I probably should be working on my thesis.
A way to word this if you wanted to keep the word "probably" in there
Nevertheless, I need to be proficient in writing, given that I decided to write the thesis in English.
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Amazing job, your English is fantastic. Not really any errors, most of my corrections are just examples of the other ways the same sentence could be said incase that is something you find helpful. Well done!
Aug. 14, 2020
Thank you! The alternative ways to say it are helpful as well!
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Procrastination This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate a way too much, and each one of them handles it differently.
Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate
Nowadays, people tend to procrastinate |
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Some are even indolent—they just don't care; they coast through life without much worrying.
Some are even indolent—they just don't care; they coast through life without The way you wrote it was great, my correction is to just show another way which you can say this, |
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Not everyone is impeccable; we all have bad days.
Not everyone is A more natural way to say this, typically people aren't described as "impeccable" but it still makes perfect sense. This is just another way it could be said. |
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We need to keep in mind that there's nothing wrong about taking a break—there's a difference between resting and procrastinating. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you keep diligent, you will feel the joy of attaining your goals; otherwise, you might feel despondent about never reaching your objectives in your life.
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If you |
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Keep doing what you have to, and you will certainly enjoy the elated feeling afterwards. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though I try to keep procrastination to a minimum, I too find myself as a victim from time to time.
Even though I try to keep procrastination to a minimum, I too find myself Again, the way you wrote it was perfect, I'm just giving another example as to how it could be said. |
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It usually takes a form of watching movies, TV shows, or videos on YouTube.
It usually takes
It usually |
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But how can one subdue this inclination to procrastinate? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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To avoid it, I try to steer my thoughts to a different direction, to something I enjoy, such as learning English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I should be probably working on my thesis.
I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I probably should be A way to word this if you wanted to keep the word "probably" in there
I would say it is also a sort of procrastination, since I probably should be "Should be" is the predicate, and "probably" is an adverb. |
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Nevertheless, I need to be proficient in writing, given that I decided to write the thesis in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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