Aug. 2, 2023
Applying to the internship
Hi everyone,
I hope all of you in a good health.
There is 2 weeks before I start my internship and until now there is no place that accepts me, I don't know why ! My GPA is so good and I have some certifications and our senior project was one of the best projects in the university. I do not know how to deal with this situation. Even if I am trying to apply to some companies their requirements incapacitating for fresh graduated students.
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Hi everyone,
I hope all of youyou all are in a good health.
Hi everyone,
I hope you all are in good health.
a verb is missing
No one says "in a good health" in good health is more suitable
There isare 2 weeks left before I start my internship and until now there is no place thats acceptsed me, I don't know why !
There are 2 weeks left before I start my internship and until now no place has accepted me, I don't know why !
weeks is plural so "are", adding left makes it make more sense, showing that there remain only 2 weeks.
Using present perfect "has accepted" is the right form. Present perfect shows actions that have not ended in the present, and the adverb "until now" belong to this tense.
Even if I am tryingtried to apply to some companies their requirements would be incapacitating for fresh graduated students.
Even if I tried to apply to some companies their requirements would be incapacitating for fresh graduated students.
Conditional sentences follow a certain structure. In this case, you have a type 2 conditional that talks about an imaginary situation/assumption of what could happen: if + past simple (tried) + would + infinitive
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Overall, you have done a good job. Try to pay attention to the verbs and sentence structures. Most people overcome these problems by increasing their exposure to the language (listening, movies, reading) and then the whole sentence just comes naturally. You have got this! Also good luck with your internship application!
Aug. 3, 2023
There isare 2 weeks left before I start my internship and until now there is no place thats acceptsed me, I don't know why !
weeks is plural so "are", adding left makes it make more sense, showing that there remain only 2 weeks.
Using present perfect "has accepted" is the right form. Present perfect shows actions that have not ended in the present, and the adverb "until now" belong to this tense.
So when sentence contains "until now" it is considered as Present perfect, right?
Hi everyone,
I hope all of you are in a good health.
Hi everyone,
I hope all of you are in good health.
There isare 2 weeks before I start my internship and until now there ihas not been a place that acceptsed me, I don't know why !
There are 2 weeks before I start my internship and until now there has not been a place that accepted me, I don't know why!
My GPA is so good and I have some certifications and o. Our senior project was one of the best projects in the university.
My GPA is good and I have some certifications. Our senior project was one of the best projects in the university.
Avoid using the word "and" as a conjunction more than once per sentence.
I do non't know how to deal with this situation.
I don't know how to deal with this situation.
Even if I am trying to apply to some companies, their requirements incapacitatingare too strict for freshly graduated students.
Even if I am trying to apply to some companies, their requirements are too strict for freshly graduated students.
Incapacitating doesn't sound quite right here
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Great job! Good luck with your internship search- I hope you find what you are looking for :)
Aug. 3, 2023
My GPA is so good and I have some certifications and o. Our senior project was one of the best projects in the university.
Avoid using the word "and" as a conjunction more than once per sentence.
What can we use instead of " and"? I know if it is formal we can use ( In addition,Furthermore,....) but if it is informal?
Aug. 3, 2023
The best way would be to use punctuation like a period or a comma to avoid a repetitive, run-on sentence:
"My GPA is good, I have some certifications and our senior project was one of the best in the university."
You could also use transition words like you mentioned after the period:
"My GPA is good and I have some certifications. Additionally, our senior project was..."
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Applying to the internship |
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Hi everyone, I hope all of you in a good health.
Hi everyone,
Hi everyone,
I hope a verb is missing No one says "in a good health" in good health is more suitable |
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There is 2 weeks before I start my internship and until now there is no place that accepts me, I don't know why !
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There weeks is plural so "are", adding left makes it make more sense, showing that there remain only 2 weeks. Using present perfect "has accepted" is the right form. Present perfect shows actions that have not ended in the present, and the adverb "until now" belong to this tense. |
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My GPA is so good and I have some certifications and our senior project was one of the best projects in the university.
My GPA is Avoid using the word "and" as a conjunction more than once per sentence. |
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I do not know how to deal with this situation.
I do |
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Even if I am trying to apply to some companies their requirements incapacitating for fresh graduated students.
Even if I am trying to apply to some companies, their requirements Incapacitating doesn't sound quite right here
Even if I Conditional sentences follow a certain structure. In this case, you have a type 2 conditional that talks about an imaginary situation/assumption of what could happen: if + past simple (tried) + would + infinitive |
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