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I listen to music almost every day, especially when I comb my hair in the morning and when I procrastinate.

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Music

I listen to music almost every day, especially when I comb my hair in the morning and when I procrastinate.

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I listen to music almost every day, especially whenilst I comb my hair in the morning and when I am procrastinateing.

Use while/whilst for simple present, and when for present continuous.
What you wrote sounded fine, but my corrections would sound more natural. I put an example of each so you can see how it looks.

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I listen to music almost every day, especially when I comb my hair in the morning and when I procrastinate.


I listen to music almost every day, especially whenilst I comb my hair in the morning and when I am procrastinateing. I listen to music almost every day, especially whilst I comb my hair in the morning and when I am procrastinating.

Use while/whilst for simple present, and when for present continuous. What you wrote sounded fine, but my corrections would sound more natural. I put an example of each so you can see how it looks.

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