April 6, 2023
The Huai River originates from the Tongbo mountain where three provinces (Henan, Anhui and Hubei) joint together.
It flows from west to east and enters into the east sea to the east of Jiangsu province.
It has three main tributaries and one of them is called the Ying River, which originates from the east part of Henan Province and flows to southeast, crossing Anhui Province into the Huai River.
The Ying river has a main tributary called the Quan River, which originates from the eastern part of Henan Province and flows east into the Ying River.
At the place where the Ying River and the Quan river joint, is the city I live in called Fuyang.
Because of these two rivers, Fuyang consists of three parts. The part on the northeast of the Ying River is called Yingdong District, the part on the north of the Quan River is called Yingquan District and the part on the south of the Quan River is called Yingzhou District.
The urban area of Fuyang covers about 200 square kilometers and has a population of about 2 million people.
Fuyang is in the mid-eastern part of China in Anhui province. The area that Fuyang is in is a vast plain without mountains and seas. It is a landlocked city.
It's an agricultural city. People there in rural areas are mainly farmers. They mainly grow wheat, corn, soybeans, sweet potatoes and so on.
There are four seasons here: spring, summer, autumn and winter. Now it's the middle of spring.
Fuyang is just a three-tier level city in China, and is rated about seventy fifth nationally. It is in third or fourth place among cities in Anhui Province.
Fuyang
The Huai River originates from the Tongbo mountain where three provinces (Henan, Anhui and Hubei) joint together.
The Huai River originates from the Tongbo mountain where three provinces (Henan, Anhui and Hubei) join together.
It flows from west to east and enters into the east sea to the east of Jiangsu province.
It has three main tributaries and one of them is called the Ying River, which originates from the east part of Henan Province and flows to southeast, crossing Anhui Province into the Huai River.
The Ying river has a main tributary called the Quan River, which originates from the eastern part of Henan Province and flows east into the Ying River.
At the place where the Ying River and the Quan river joint, is the city I live in called Fuyang.
At the place where the Ying River and the Quan river join, is the city I live in called Fuyang.
Because of these two rivers, Fuyang consists of three parts.
The part on the northeast of the Ying River is called Yingdong District, the part on the north of the Quan River is called Yingquan District and the part on the south of the Quan River is called Yingzhou District.
The urban area of Fuyang covers about 200 square kilometers and has a population of about 2 million people.
Fuyang is in the mid-eastern part of China in Anhui province.
The area thataround of Fuyang is in is a vast plain without mountains andor seas.
The area around of Fuyang is a vast plain without mountains or seas.
It is a landlocked city.
It's an agricultural city.
People there in rural areas are mainly farmers.
They mainly grow wheat, corn, soybeans, sweet potatoes and so on.
There are four seasons here: spring, summer, autumn and winter.
Now it's the middle of spring.
Fuyang is just a three-tier level city in China, and is rated about seventy fifth nationally.
It is in third or fourth place among cities in Anhui Province.
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The Huai River originates from the Tongbo mountain where three provinces (Henan, Anhui and Hubei) joint together.
The Huai River originates from the Tongbo mountain where three provinces (Henan, Anhui and Hubei) join |
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It flows from west to east and enters into the east sea to the east of Jiangsu province. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has three main tributaries and one of them is called the Ying River, which originates from the east part of Henan Province and flows to southeast, crossing Anhui Province into the Huai River. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The Ying river has a main tributary called the Quan River, which originates from the eastern part of Henan Province and flows east into the Ying River. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the place where the Ying River and the Quan river joint, is the city I live in called Fuyang.
At the place where the Ying River and the Quan river join |
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Because of these two rivers, Fuyang consists of three parts. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The part on the northeast of the Ying River is called Yingdong District, the part on the north of the Quan River is called Yingquan District and the part on the south of the Quan River is called Yingzhou District. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The urban area of Fuyang covers about 200 square kilometers and has a population of about 2 million people. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fuyang is in the mid-eastern part of China in Anhui province. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The area that Fuyang is in is a vast plain without mountains and seas.
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It is a landlocked city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's an agricultural city. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People there in rural areas are mainly farmers. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They mainly grow wheat, corn, soybeans, sweet potatoes and so on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are four seasons here: spring, summer, autumn and winter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now it's the middle of spring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fuyang is just a three-tier level city in China, and is rated about seventy fifth nationally. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is in third or fourth place among cities in Anhui Province. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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