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7days doing 1 task, my new office

This week is mid-shift and I set a task for me.

The next 7 days I will get up at 6:30.

First, I will start jogging for 1 hour.

After that I will practice snooker for 2 hours.

Today was the first day I jogged one hour but I only practice one-hour snooker.

Because I need to go to the bank.

Anyway, the next 6 days will be my challenge to keep this promise.

After the mid-shift is early-shift.

My plan will go to near library and spend 5 hours (4:30-9:30) for studying.

These two places will be my new office to create my future.

Say goodbye to my daily job.

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7days doing 1 task, my new office

This week isI have mid- shift and I set a taskworking hours this week so I decided to set certain objectives for meyself.

TFor the next 7 days I will get up at 6:30.

First, I will start jogginjog for 1 hour.

After that I will practice snooker for 2 hours.

Today was the first day I jogged one hour but I onlyof my new routine and I successfully managed to jog for an hour. However, I curtailed my snooker practice to one- hour instead of two hours snooker.ince I needed to go to the bank.

You can easily fit the next sentence in this one as I have shown

Because I needed to go to the bank.

Anyway, ithe next 6 days will be mya challenge to keep this promisefor me to adhere to my planned routine for the next 6 days.

After theis week of mid-shift is early-shiftworking hours, I will have early-shift working hours.

My plan will be to go to the nearby library and spend 5 hours (4:30-9:30) for studying.

These two places will become my new office to create my futureas I seek to create a better future for myself.

Sorry but I am not sure which two places you are really referring to here

Say goodbye to my daily job.

7 days doing 1 task, and my new office

This week is mid-shift and I set a task for me.

I'm not sure what you mean here

The next 7 days I will get up at 6:30.

First, I will start jogginjog for 1 hour.

After that, I will practice snooker for 2 hours.

Today was the first day I jogged for one hour, but I only practice one-hour snooked snooker for one hour.

Because I needed to go to the bank.

Anyway, over the next 6 days, I will be my challengkeeping my promise to keepdo this promischallenge.

After the mid-shift is the early- shift.

My plan will gis to tgo near the library and spend 5 hours (4:30-9:30) for studying.

These two places will be my new office to create my, so I can have a good future.

Say goodbye to my daily job.

7days doing 1 task, my new office


7 days doing 1 task, and my new office

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This week is mid-shift and I set a task for me.


This week is mid-shift and I set a task for me.

I'm not sure what you mean here

This week isI have mid- shift and I set a taskworking hours this week so I decided to set certain objectives for meyself.

The next 7 days I will get up at 6:30.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

TFor the next 7 days I will get up at 6:30.

First, I will start jogging for 1 hour.


First, I will start jogginjog for 1 hour.

First, I will start jogginjog for 1 hour.

After that I will practice snooker for 2 hours.


After that, I will practice snooker for 2 hours.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today was the first day I jogged one hour but I only practice one-hour snooker.


Today was the first day I jogged for one hour, but I only practice one-hour snooked snooker for one hour.

Today was the first day I jogged one hour but I onlyof my new routine and I successfully managed to jog for an hour. However, I curtailed my snooker practice to one- hour instead of two hours snooker.ince I needed to go to the bank.

You can easily fit the next sentence in this one as I have shown

Because I need to go to the bank.


Because I needed to go to the bank.

Because I needed to go to the bank.

Anyway, the next 6 days will be my challenge to keep this promise.


Anyway, over the next 6 days, I will be my challengkeeping my promise to keepdo this promischallenge.

Anyway, ithe next 6 days will be mya challenge to keep this promisefor me to adhere to my planned routine for the next 6 days.

After the mid-shift is early-shift.


After the mid-shift is the early- shift.

After theis week of mid-shift is early-shiftworking hours, I will have early-shift working hours.

My plan will go to near library and spend 5 hours (4:30-9:30) for studying.


My plan will gis to tgo near the library and spend 5 hours (4:30-9:30) for studying.

My plan will be to go to the nearby library and spend 5 hours (4:30-9:30) for studying.

These two places will be my new office to create my future.


These two places will be my new office to create my, so I can have a good future.

These two places will become my new office to create my futureas I seek to create a better future for myself.

Sorry but I am not sure which two places you are really referring to here

Say goodbye to my daily job.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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