July 8, 2021
Many years ago, I have tried continuously jogging for a month.
At the end I only miss one day. 29/30
That time I don’t have a job.
Last week I have tried continuously jogging one hour each day.
After that I will have 2 hours snooker practice.
And I also have a job working from 15:00-23:00.
I completed!
Am I happy? Not really.
This task isn’t that hard.
Physically is no problem at all.
The hardest part is how mentally overcome this task.
Because it is so boring and l already want to escape in the second day.
Anyway, finished this task give me a lot of confidence to face my next challenge.
7D Jogging 1H, 6D Snooker 2H + Job
Many years ago, I have tried continuously joggingto go jogging every day for a month.
"continuously" is a little too much here, it sounds a little like you wanted to jog 24 hours a day for 30 days. And present perfect "have tried" doesn't really seem to fit.
At the end I only missed one day.
Past tense for this too.
29/30
TAt that time I doidn’t have a job.
And past tense again.
Last week I have tried continuously jogging for one hour each day.
"for one hour each day" means "continuously" works much better here, it's now clear you just mean jogging for an hour without a break. And present perfect "have tried" is good. You could also use present perfect progressive "I have been trying to jog".
This is clear and understandable without "for", by the way, it just sounds better with it!
After that I will have 2 hours snooker practice.
And I also have a job working from 15:00-23:00.
I completed the week!
This sounds really weird and vague - you need to say what you completed.
Am I happy?
Not really.
This task isn’t that hard.
Physically it is no problem at all.
Or "it's".
The hardest part is how to mentally overcome this task.
"how" here needs a to-infinitive. Like I don't know how to drive a car, I will teach you how to bake this cake, this book explains how to identify birds.
It would be a little more natural to use a gerund: "The hardest part is mentally overcoming the task."
Because it is so boring and l already want to escape in the second day.
Anyway, finisheding this task giave me a lot of confidence to face my next challenge.
Here you really need the gerund, or something awkward like "The fact that I finished this task gave me". I changed to past tense "gave" but you could also say "gives me a lot of confidence", which would focus more on how you have the confidence right now - but "give" is wrong.
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7D Jogging 1H, 6D Snooker 2H +Job 7D Jogging 1H, 6D Snooker 2H + Job |
Many years ago, I have tried continuously jogging for a month. Many years ago, I "continuously" is a little too much here, it sounds a little like you wanted to jog 24 hours a day for 30 days. And present perfect "have tried" doesn't really seem to fit. |
At the end I only miss one day. At the end I only missed one day. Past tense for this too. |
29/30 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
That time I don’t have a job.
And past tense again. |
Last week I have tried continuously jogging one hour each day. Last week I have tried continuously jogging for one hour each day. "for one hour each day" means "continuously" works much better here, it's now clear you just mean jogging for an hour without a break. And present perfect "have tried" is good. You could also use present perfect progressive "I have been trying to jog". This is clear and understandable without "for", by the way, it just sounds better with it! |
After that I will have 2 hours snooker practice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
And I also have a job working from 15:00-23:00. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I completed! I completed the week! This sounds really weird and vague - you need to say what you completed. |
Am I happy? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Not really. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
This task isn’t that hard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Physically is no problem at all. Physically it is no problem at all. Or "it's". |
The hardest part is how mentally overcome this task. The hardest part is how to mentally overcome this task. "how" here needs a to-infinitive. Like I don't know how to drive a car, I will teach you how to bake this cake, this book explains how to identify birds. It would be a little more natural to use a gerund: "The hardest part is mentally overcoming the task." |
Because it is so boring and l already want to escape in the second day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Anyway, finished this task give me a lot of confidence to face my next challenge. Anyway, finish Here you really need the gerund, or something awkward like "The fact that I finished this task gave me". I changed to past tense "gave" but you could also say "gives me a lot of confidence", which would focus more on how you have the confidence right now - but "give" is wrong. |
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