She hadIn 5 years she never been skippinged a classes for 5 years. In 5 years she never skipped a class.

She had never been skippinged a classes for 5 years. She had never skipped a class for 5 years.

When I finished school I had no idea what I would do inwith my life. When I finished school I had no idea what I would do with my life.

with my life sounds better

When I finished school, I had no idea what I would do inwith my life. When I finished school, I had no idea what I would do with my life.

I didn’t understand for whatwhy I should have to take a gap year. I didn’t understand why I should take a gap year.

I didn’t understand for what I should have towhy i should take a gap year. I didn’t understand why i should take a gap year.

I decided to go for a working while I was looking for a college. I decided to go working while I was looking for a college.

I became an parking assistanworked as a valet. I worked as a valet.

It wasn't a difficult job, but I had a very low salarywas paid very little. It wasn't a difficult job, but I was paid very little.

I can meintain myself byget by on $100 a week. I can get by on $100 a week.

it’s spelled maintain but this phrasing is more appropriate

I can meintainlook after myself bywith $100 a week. I can look after myself with $100 a week.

maintain used more in English for an object

Also, II also signed up for an evening classes in the worst college in the world. I also signed up for an evening classes in the worst college in the world.

When I saw a timetablethe course offerings there I was really shocked. When I saw the course offerings there I was really shocked.

Do you mean to say that your individual schedule was surprising? I assume you meant the offerings of the college generally

Fortunately It was a coeducational college. Fortunately It was a coed college.

In the US we don’t usually spell out coeducational, just coed is more common.

There was a lotere many beautiful girls. There were many beautiful girls.

I met Marla there. I met Marla there.

As far as she isI’m concerned, Marla is the most literatewell-read person I’ve ever met. As far as I’m concerned, Marla is the most well-read person I’ve ever met.

She learntdid very well atin college and nobody couldn’t keep up with her. She did very well in college and nobody could keep up with her.

She learnt very well studied a lot at college and nobody couldn’t keep up with her. She studied a lot at college and nobody could keep up with her.

Her parents are very reach peopleich. Her parents are very rich.

did you mean wealthy or approachable?

Her parents are very reaich people. Her parents are very rich people.

Rich not reach. To reach is a verb

She never study at comprehensiveattended public school. She never attended public school.

I think this is what you mean?

She never studyied at a comprehensive school. She never studied at a comprehensive school.