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Rainy Days

I don't quite fancy rainy days .Although rainy days live in poets' extraordinary sentences ,it's not a welcoming thing for me .I'm a freshman , you see ,clothes will not dry up easily in rainy days (Chinese universities do not offer dryers ! And it's a custom for Chinese to let clothes dry under the sun ).So, in rainy days ,I get piles of clothes waiting to be dried .Aside from that ,my shoes and socks get wet easily ,which also burdens me .People say rainy days bring slight sorrow ,I believe the dark background ,inconvenience of catching an umbrella ,and wet environment are the main facts !

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Rainy Days

Rainy Days


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I don't quite fancy rainy days .Although rainy days live in poets' extraordinary sentences ,it's not a welcoming thing for me .I'm a freshman , you see ,clothes will not dry up easily in rainy days (Chinese universities do not offer dryers !


I don't quite fancy rainy days . Although rainy days live in poets' extraordinary sentences ,it's, they are not a welcoming thing for me . You see, I'm a freshman , you see ,c. Clothes willdo not dry up easily ion rainy days. (Chinese universities do not offer dryers ! I don't quite fancy rainy days. Although rainy days live in poets' extraordinary sentences, they are not a welcoming thing for me. You see, I'm a freshman. Clothes do not dry easily on rainy days. (Chinese universities do not offer dryers!

"dry up" is a verb that refers to situations where the liquid is completely depleted from a large body, for instance "a lake dried up". But it does not suit the case of clothes.

I don't quite fancy rainy days . Although rainy days live in poets' extraordinary sentences , it's not a welcoming thing for me .I'm a freshman , you see , clothes will not dry up easily in rainy days (Chinese universities do not offer dryers !). I don't quite fancy rainy days. Although rainy days live in poets' extraordinary sentences, it's not a welcoming thing for me .I'm a freshman, you see, clothes will not dry up easily in rainy days (Chinese universities do not offer dryers!).

And it's a custom for Chinese to let clothes dry under the sun ).So, in rainy days ,I get piles of clothes waiting to be dried .Aside from that ,my shoes and socks get wet easily ,which also burdens me .People say rainy days bring slight sorrow ,I believe the dark background ,inconvenience of catching an umbrella ,and wet environment are the main facts !


And it's a custom for Chinese to let clothes dry under the sun ).So, i.) So on rainy days , I get piles of clothes waiting to be dried . Aside from that ,my shoes and socks get wet easily , which also burdens me . People say rainy days bring slight sorrow. ,I believe the dark background ,gloomy environment, inconvenience of catchrrying an umbrella , and the wet environment are the main factors ! And it's a custom for Chinese to let clothes dry under the sun.) So on rainy days, I get piles of clothes waiting to be dried. Aside from that ,my shoes and socks get wet easily, which also burdens me. People say rainy days bring slight sorrow. I believe the gloomy environment, inconvenience of carrying an umbrella, and the wet environment are the main factors !

factors = 原因 facts = 事实

AndBecause it's a custom for Chinese to let clothes dry under the sun ). So, ion rainy days ,I get, I acquire piles of clothes waiting to be dried . Aside from that , my shoes and socks get wet easily , which also adds to my burdens me . People say rainy days bring slight sorrow , I believe that the dark background ,on these days, the inconvenience of catchgetting an umbrella , and wet environment are the main facts ! Because it's a custom for Chinese to let clothes dry under the sun. So, on rainy days, I acquire piles of clothes waiting to be dried. Aside from that, my shoes and socks get wet easily, which also adds to my burden. People say rainy days bring slight sorrow, I believe that the dark background on these days, the inconvenience of getting an umbrella, and wet environment are the main facts!

I corrected the grammar, but I don't understand the last sentence. You mean to say rainy days are worse than people say they are, or did you want to list all the downsides of rainy days or something else entirely??

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