Jan. 18, 2021
Translation Practice
WHO and the American wildlife association have all said before that due to the rapid population expansion, wildlife habitats were destroyed. Virus hidden under rainforest, forest, lakes and ice sheets gradually spilled out, and then spilled out into human society.
Animals in nature often have strong immunity, just like bats. This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in the body.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the nature hosts of many viruses, but humans can’t. After human contact with these infected animal hosts, it is easy to infect SARS-CoV-2.
Up to now, there is no accurate answer as to where SARS-CoV-2 came from. But the only certainty is that it has nothing to do with astrology.
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WHO and the American wWildlife aAssociation have all said before that due to the rapid population expansion, wildlife habitats were destroyed.
WHO and the American Wildlife Association have all said before that due to the rapid population expansion, wildlife habitats were destroyed.
VirusThe virus has been hidden under rainforest, forest, lakes and ice sheets gradually spilledreading out, and then spilled outeventually infiltrating into human society.
The virus has been hidden under rainforest, forest, lakes and ice sheets gradually spreading out, then eventually infiltrating into human society.
‘To infiltrate’ is an effective verb choice I recommend to use in informative paragraphs like this.
Animals in natureWild animals often have strong immunity, just like bats.
Wild animals often have strong immunity, just like bats.
This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in the body.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the natureal hosts of many viruses, but humans caren’t.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the natural hosts of many viruses, but humans aren’t.
After human contact with these infected animal hosts, it is easy to infectspread SARS-CoV-2.
After human contact with these infected animals, it is easy to spread SARS-CoV-2.
Up to now, there is no accurate answer as to where SARS-CoV-2 came from.
But the only certainty is that it has nothing to do with astrology.
Jan. 18, 2021
Animals in natureWild animals often have strong immunity, just like bats.
Immunity is correct, it is one of those strange adjectives where you don’t need to make it plural. In more general contexts, you don’t need to make it plural unless there’s lots of different types of immunities.
Jan. 18, 2021
This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in the body.
‘it’s’ not ‘the’.
Jan. 18, 2021
Up to now, there is no accurate answer as to where SARS-CoV-2 came from.
‘Even now’ instead of ‘Up to how’.
Jan. 18, 2021
Thank you very much
Translation Practice
WHO and the American wWildlife aAssociation have all said before that due to the rapid population expansiongrowth, wildlife habitats werehave been destroyed.
WHO and the American Wildlife Association have all said before that due to rapid population growth, wildlife habitats have been destroyed.
Capitalised the organisation's name. Rapid population expansion changed to rapid population growth to sound more natural. Changed 'were destroyed', to 'have been' to imply a causal link between rapid population growth and the wildlife habitats being destroyed.
Viruses hidden underwithin rainforests, forests, lakes and ice sheets gradually spilled out, and then spilled out into human society.
Viruses hidden within rainforests, forests, lakes and ice sheets gradually spilled out, and then spilled out into human society.
Changed virus into plural form, changed under rainforest to within (within suggests that it is contained within that habitat, which the sentence seems to say) and changed forest to forests to add consistency, since the other habitats were all plural.
Animals in nature often have strong immunityies, just like bats.
Animals in nature often have strong immunities, just like bats.
Changed immunity to immunities, since animals is plural
This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in theits body.
This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in its body.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the natureal hosts of many viruses, but humans can’are not.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the natural hosts of many viruses, but humans are not.
Changed humans can't to humans are not, since it states the other animals 'are' something, so to contrast, humans are not.
After human contact with these infected animal hosts, it is easy to infectspread SARS-CoV-2.
After human contact with these infected animal hosts, it is easy to spread SARS-CoV-2.
Changed infect to spread; the humans are not infecting the animal hosts. The animal hosts are giving it to humans and spreading the virus
Up toEven now, there is no accurate answer as to where SARS-CoV-2 came from.
Even now, there is no accurate answer as to where SARS-CoV-2 came from.
Up to now suggests that there has been an answer found. Even now suggests that an answer has not yet been found
Jan. 18, 2021
Thank you so much.
Jan. 18, 2021
Animals in nature often have strong immunityies, just like bats.
Changed immunity to immunities, since animals is plural
Immunity is correct, it is one of those strange adjectives where you don’t need to make it plural. In more general contexts, you don’t need to make it plural unless there’s lots of different types of immunities.
Jan. 19, 2021
Immunity is correct, it is one of those strange adjectives where you don’t need to make it plural. In more general contexts, you don’t need to make it plural unless there’s lots of different types of immunities.
Ah, shows how even as native speakers we get things wrong sometimes. Thank you!
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Animals in nature often have strong immunity, just like bats.
Animals in nature often have strong immunit Changed immunity to immunities, since animals is plural
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WHO and the American wildlife association have all said before that due to the rapid population expansion, wildlife habitats were destroyed.
WHO and the American Capitalised the organisation's name. Rapid population expansion changed to rapid population growth to sound more natural. Changed 'were destroyed', to 'have been' to imply a causal link between rapid population growth and the wildlife habitats being destroyed.
WHO and the American |
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Virus hidden under rainforest, forest, lakes and ice sheets gradually spilled out, and then spilled out into human society.
Viruses hidden Changed virus into plural form, changed under rainforest to within (within suggests that it is contained within that habitat, which the sentence seems to say) and changed forest to forests to add consistency, since the other habitats were all plural.
‘To infiltrate’ is an effective verb choice I recommend to use in informative paragraphs like this. |
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This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in the body.
This mammal has a very high body temperature and a fast heartbeat, and can coexist peacefully with various viruses in This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the nature hosts of many viruses, but humans can’t.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the natur Changed humans can't to humans are not, since it states the other animals 'are' something, so to contrast, humans are not.
Orangutans, porcupines and other animals from Africa are also the natur |
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After human contact with these infected animal hosts, it is easy to infect SARS-CoV-2.
After human contact with these infected animal hosts, it is easy to Changed infect to spread; the humans are not infecting the animal hosts. The animal hosts are giving it to humans and spreading the virus
After human contact with these infected animal |
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Up to now, there is no accurate answer as to where SARS-CoV-2 came from.
Up to now suggests that there has been an answer found. Even now suggests that an answer has not yet been found This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But the only certainty is that it has nothing to do with astrology. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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