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russian_eugene

Dec. 16, 2019

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I don't like Mondays.

Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?
I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible just work a little because I'm getting quite exhausted. I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, and the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts. But, anyway, I need a rest.
Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax. So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get your precious presents <3.
P. S. Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong. What a pity! This website and its amazing community helps me more.

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I don't like Mondays.

Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax.

So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get your precious presents <3.

P.

S.

Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong.

What a pity!

This website and its amazing community helps me more.

I don't like Mondays.

Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax.

Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong.

What a pity!

I don't like Mondays.

Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?

I don't like Mondays.


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Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?


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Do the other days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays? Do the other days of the week exist just to measure the distance from Mondays?

Do days of the week exist just to measure the distance fromtime until Mondays? Do days of the week exist just to measure the time until Mondays?

Gramatically, yours was correct, but I think this portrays your context better. "distance from" would be counting Tuesday is one day after Monday "time until" is like, "ugh, only 2 days until Monday!"

Do days of the week exist just to measure their distance from Mondays? Do days of the week exist just to measure their distance from Monday?

I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible just work a little because I'm getting quite exhausted.


I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible, I wish I could just work a little because I'm getting quite exhausted. I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible, I wish I could just work a little because I'm getting quite exhausted.

When you say "Do X, or if [something], do Y", it sounds better to mimic the pattern you used with the verbs in the "Do X" portion. The second part in your original text sounds like "or if that's impossible I wish I just work", which is ungrammatical.

I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or if that's impossible I could just work a little on those days, because I'm getting quite exhausted. I wish I didn't work on Mondays, or that I could just work a little on those days, because I'm getting quite exhausted.

I wish I didn't have to work on Mondays, or if that's impossible, I wish I could just work for a little bit because I'm getting quite exhausted. I wish I didn't have to work on Mondays, or if that's impossible, I wish I could just work for a little bit because I'm getting quite exhausted.

I added "have to" just to imply that is an obligation. "for a little" and "a little bit" are the same, I personally would just say "for a little bit" if I were expressing this to a friend or family member.

I wish I didn't have to work on Mondays, or if that's imnot possible, just work a little, because I'm getting quite exhausted. I wish I didn't have to work on Mondays, or if that's not possible, just work a little, because I'm getting quite exhausted.

I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, and the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.


I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, andbut then the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts. I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, but then the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.

"But" because you're showing contrast, "then" is optional but sounds better because it clearly shows the second part follows after the first.

I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, andbut then the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts. I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, but then the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.

I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, andbut the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts. I can work on Saturday because I'm getting pumped up, but the weekend just crashes all my dreams and creative thoughts.

But, anyway, I need a rest.


But, aAnyway, I need a rest. Anyway, I need a rest.

But, anyway, I need a rest. But anyway, I need a rest.

Yours is also correct, just was showing you a different way! Since you are saying "but anyway" as a single introductory phrase, you can use only one comma if you want.

Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it so I can finally relax.


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Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait for it soa little longer then I can finally relax. Everyone will be celebrating Christmas soon, so I just need to wait a little longer then I can finally relax.

So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get your precious presents <3.


So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well, and that you get your precious presents <3. I hope you all will be celebrating it as well, and that you get your precious presents <3.

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So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and get youeveryone can get their precious presents <3. So I hope you all will be celebrating it as well and everyone can get their precious presents <3.

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Grammarly says that my entry uses "weak language", but it won't show me what have I written wrong.


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What a pity!


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This website and its amazing community helps me more.


This website and its amazing community helps me more (than Grammarly). This website and its amazing community helps me more (than Grammarly).

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