July 8, 2025
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I knew that flood caused in America by watching news in the middle of going high school.
I am good at math, so it was surprised for me to miss math problem.
By the way, I have worries about friends.
Even though he has my hobby, I think that his chat is boring.
In addition, I get ready for Culture Festival.
学校に行く途中にニュースでアメリカで洪水があったことを知った。
僕は数学が得意なので数学の問題でミスをして焦った。
ところで私には友達についての悩みがある。
彼とは同じ趣味を持っているが、私にとって彼の会話が面白くないんだ。
後は文化祭の準備をしていたよ。
I klearnewd that floods were caused in America by watching news in the middle of going to high school.
Also, I am good at math, so it was surpriseding for me to missget a math problem incorrect.
You switch topics abruptly here without acknowledging that you're doing it or giving context for when/where this event happened. I'd add another sentence at the start, like 'Also, in high school today, I got a math problem wrong.'
By the way, I have worries about my friends.
Even though hwe shas myre a hobby, I think that his chate is boring to talk to.
In addition, I getam getting ready for the Culture Festival.
I'd add 'my high school's culture festival' to give more context.
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Great work! English is usually more high-context than Japanese, so try to give more context next time.
I knew that flood causelearned about a flood in America by watching the news in the middle ofwhile going to high school.
This response seems a little more natural in a conversation rather than saying "I knew"
"In the middle of" is a preposition of where something could be but you're talking about it in a time sense, so you use words like while or during.
I am good at math, so itI was surprised for me tothat I missed a math problem.
If you want to use it, you can say, "it was surprising to me", but if you want to use surprised, you have to use "I was surprised"
By the way, I haveam worriesd about my friends.
You don't typically say you have worries, you use the verb to be, so are/am.
Even though hwe shas myre a hobby, I think that his chat is boringhe's boring to talk to.
Instead of he has my hobby, you say we share it because you both have it.
In addition, I'm get ready for Culture Festival.
In this one, you also use the verb to be, so you would say "I am getting ready..."
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You're doing great so far! Just try to make your conversation a little less uptight and more natural. Maybe focus on conversational words and writing, but keep up the good work!
July 9, 2025
Thank you so much! Your way to teach is good!
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I knew that flood caused in America by watching news in the middle of going high school. I This response seems a little more natural in a conversation rather than saying "I knew" "In the middle of" is a preposition of where something could be but you're talking about it in a time sense, so you use words like while or during. I |
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I am good at math, so it was surprised for me to miss math problem. I am good at math, so If you want to use it, you can say, "it was surprising to me", but if you want to use surprised, you have to use "I was surprised" Also, I am good at math, so it was surpris You switch topics abruptly here without acknowledging that you're doing it or giving context for when/where this event happened. I'd add another sentence at the start, like 'Also, in high school today, I got a math problem wrong.' |
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By the way, I have worries about friends. By the way, I You don't typically say you have worries, you use the verb to be, so are/am. By the way, I have worries about my friend |
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Even though he has my hobby, I think that his chat is boring. Even though Instead of he has my hobby, you say we share it because you both have it. Even though |
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In addition, I get ready for Culture Festival. In addition, I'm get ready for Culture Festival. In this one, you also use the verb to be, so you would say "I am getting ready..." In addition, I I'd add 'my high school's culture festival' to give more context. |
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