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mapomapo

June 7, 2026

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My sister's birthday

Two days ago was my little sister's birthday.
She values celebration or any events and likes fuuy stuff, so she wore a sash that said "today is my birthday!" all day by her self.
That day's dinner had Japanese foods which she likes. We ate home-made chocolate cake.
She loves cats and has a pile of different type of stuffed cats. She requested my mum to draw a face of cat that she loves the most on the cake.
I'm older then her for three years, but her height is almost sam as me.
She is taller than other kids in the same grade as her in Japanese weekend school.
I'm worried that if she will be taller than me these days.
My speed of grow suddenly stopped about one years ago and I only got one cm from four month ago.
I want my sister to get shorter.

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We ate home-made chocolate cake.

I want my sister to get shorter.

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mapomapo

June 8, 2026

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Two days ago was my little sister's birthday.

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Two days ago was my little sister's birthday.

We ate home-made chocolate cake.

She requested my mum to draw a face of cat that she loves the most on the cake.

I want my sister to get shorter.

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mapomapo

June 8, 2026

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My sister's birthday


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Two days ago was my little sister's birthday.


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Two days ago was my little sister's birthday. Two days ago was my little sister's birthday.

I believe it is more common to hear: It was my little sister's birthday two days ago.

She values celebration or any events and likes fuuy stuff, so she wore a sash that said "today is my birthday!" all day by her self.


She valuesenjoys any celebration or any events and likes fuuy stuffnny things, so she wore a sash that said "today is my birthday!" all day by her self. She enjoys any celebration or events and likes funny things, so she wore a sash that said "today is my birthday!" all day.

She values celebration ors anyd events and likes fuunny stuff, so she wore a sash that said "tToday is my birthday!" all day by her selfjust because she wanted to. She values celebrations and events and likes funny stuff, so she wore a sash that said "Today is my birthday!" all day just because she wanted to.

She values celebration ors anyd events and likes fuunny stuff, so she wore a sash that said, "today is my birthday!" all day by her self. She values celebrations and events and likes funny stuff, so she wore a sash that said, "today is my birthday!" all day by herself.

That day's dinner had Japanese foods which she likes.


That day's dinner had Japanese foods which she likeher favourite Japanese foods. That day's dinner had her favourite Japanese foods.

That day's dinner hadFor dinner that day, we had the Japanese foods whichthat she likes. For dinner that day, we had the Japanese foods that she likes.

That day's dinner had Japanese foods which she likes. That day's dinner had Japanese foods which she likes.

More simply: We ate Japanese food for dinner, which she likes.

We ate home-made chocolate cake.


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We ate home-made chocolate cake. We ate homemade chocolate cake.

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She loves cats and has a pile of different type of stuffed cats.


She loves cats and has a pile of different types of stuffed cats. She loves cats and has a pile of different types of stuffed cats.

She loves cats and has a pilecollection of different types of stuffed cats. She loves cats and has a collection of different types of stuffed cats.

She loves cats and has a pile of different types of stuffed cats. She loves cats and has a pile of different types of stuffed cats.

She requested my mum to draw a face of cat that she loves the most on the cake.


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She requested myasked our mum to draw athe face of cat that she loves the most on the cake. She asked our mum to draw the face of cat she loves the most on the cake.

She requested my mum to draw a face of the cat that she loves the most on the cake. She requested my mum draw a face of the cat that she loves the most on the cake.

I'm older then her for three years, but her height is almost sam as me.


I'm older thean her forby three years, but sher height is almost samas tall as me. I'm older than her by three years, but she is almost as tall as me.

I'm older then her forby three years, but her height is almost same as mine. I'm older then her by three years, but her height is almost same as mine.

I'm older thean her forby three years, but her height is almost the same as mine. I'm older than her by three years, but her height is almost the same as mine.

More common: "She is almost as tall as I am"

She is taller than other kids in the same grade as her in Japanese weekend school.


She is taller than other kids in the samer grade as her int Japanese weekend school. She is taller than other kids in her grade at Japanese weekend school.

She is taller than other kids in the same grade as her inat Japanese weekend school. She is taller than other kids in the same grade as her at Japanese weekend school.

She is taller than the other kids in the same grade as her inat Japanese weekend school. She is taller than the other kids in the same grade as her at Japanese weekend school.

Your original sentence was fine and understandable. My correction is how I maybe would have written it.

I'm worried that if she will be taller than me these days.


I'm worried that if she will begrow taller than me these dayssoon. I'm worried that she will grow taller than me soon.

I'm worried that if she will begrow taller than me one of these days. I'm worried that she will grow taller than me one of these days.

I'm worried that if she will be taller than me one of these days. I'm worried that she will be taller than me one of these days.

My speed of grow suddenly stopped about one years ago and I only got one cm from four month ago.


My speed of growI suddenly stopped getting taller about one years ago and I only gotrew one cm fromin four month agos. I suddenly stopped getting taller about one year ago and I only grew one cm in four months.

My speed of growgrowth spurt suddenly stopped about one years ago and I have only gotrown one cm fromentimeter in the past four month agos. My growth spurt suddenly stopped about one year ago and I have only grown one centimeter in the past four months.

My speed of growgrowth speed suddenly stopped about one years ago, and I only gotrew one cm from four month ago. My growth speed suddenly stopped about one years ago, and I only grew one cm from four month ago.

Speed of growth is understandable, but I think it'd be more common "growth speed". Even more common would be: "I stopped growing so quickly about one year ago"

I want my sister to get shorter.


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