I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin. I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin.

I'm Mia, but my Korean name is Youjin. I'm Mia, but my Korean name is Youjin.

the "but" adds contrast since your korean name and your name is different

I'm Mia, my Korea name is Youjin. I'm Mia, my Korea name is Youjin.

I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin. I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin.

I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin. I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin.

I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin. I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin.

"Korea" is a noun, "Korean" is an adjective

I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin. I'm Mia, my Korean name is Youjin.

... and I am Lionel, nice meeting you here.

I am (or I'm) currently living in Canada. I am (or I'm) currently living in Canada.

I am currently living in Canada. I am currently living in Canada.

Or "I currently live in Canada"

I am currently living in Canada. I am currently living in Canada.

OR I currently live in Canada.

I currently livinge in Canada. I currently live in Canada.

"I am currently living in Canada" or "I currently live in Canada"!

I am currently living in Canada. I am currently living in Canada.

"living" needs to be paired with "am" / "is" / etc. as appropriate for the subject. In this case you used "I", so you need "am" You could also say "I currently live in Canada" instead.

I am currently living in Canada. I am currently living in Canada.

I have lived in Canada for around 17 years in the past myself.

I'm getting ready to go to college. I'm getting ready to go to college.

I'm getting ready to go to college., I'm getting ready to go to college,

I'm getting readypreparing to go to college. I'm preparing to go to college.

So, I'm studying English so harda lot of English. So, I'm studying a lot of English.

not sure if "so hard" is natural. Maybe you could also say "I'm studying hard to improve my English"

So,so I'm studying English so hard. so I'm studying English so hard.

A complete sentence should not start with "so." Instead, "so" is used to connect one complete sentence to the one before it.

So, I'm studying English so hardas much as I can. So, I'm studying English as much as I can.

"so hard" isn't incorrect, but it doesn't sound as natural.

So, I'm studying English aso hard as I can. So I'm studying English as hard as I can.

as much as I can, as much as possible, etc. - all work

So, I'm studying English so hard. So, I'm studying English hard.

So, I'm studying English so hard(very hard / a lot). So, I'm studying English (very hard / a lot).

"very" is the more natural strengthener to use here rather than "so", but "a lot" is even more likely to be used by natives.

So, I'm studying English sovery hard. So, I'm studying English very hard.

IWhen I first started learneding English at the first time, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistakes over and over again still, even now When I first started learning English, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistakes over and over again, even now

I truly want to breakovercome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English. I truly want to overcome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English.

"break my fears" is understandable; it gets the message across. However, the more typical phrase is "conquer my fears" or "overcome my fears."

I trureally want to breakovercome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English. I really want to overcome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English.

I truly want to breakovercome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English. I truly want to overcome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English.

"Break my fears" isn't a natural phrase in English.

I truly want to breakovercome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening, and reading English. I truly want to overcome my fears, so I keep speaking, writing, listening, and reading English.

I truly want to breakovercome my fears, I keepso I continue on speaking, writing, listening and reading English. I truly want to overcome my fears, so I continue on speaking, writing, listening and reading English.

I truly want to break my fears, I want to keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English. I truly want to break my fears, I want to keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English.

I truly want to break my fears, I(face/defeat) my fears, so I (will/can) keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English. I truly want to (face/defeat) my fears, so I (will/can) keep speaking, writing, listening and reading English.

"so I will keep speaking ..." implies a sense of determination, that you're going to keep doing it until your goal is complete "so I can keep speaking" on the other hand is talking about the goal, i.e. speaking/writing/listening/... is what you want to do able to do after you face your fears

I truly want to breakovercome my fears, I keep by persistently speaking, writing, listening and reading in English. I truly want to overcome my fears by persistently speaking, writing, listening and reading in English.

pPlease come with me on my English journey. Please come with me on my English journey.

pPlease come with mejoin/ support me in my English journey. Please join/ support me in my English journey.

"Support" gives the impression that you want people to follow you and encourage you and correct you, which sounds like what you are going for?

pPlease come with me on my English journey. Please come with me on my English journey.

In English, a journey is something you "go on" "I'm going on a journey" "Please come on this journey with me" This also works for similar words like trip.

pPlease come with me on my English journey. Please come with me on my English journey.

pPlease come with me on my English journey. Please come with me on my English journey.

pPlease come with mefollow me on my English journey. Please follow me on my English journey.

pPlease come with me on my English journey. Please come with me on my English journey.

please come with mejoin me in my English journey. please join me in my English journey.

When I learned English at the first time, I was so frustrated because I madke the same mistakes over and over again sup untill now When I learned English the first time, I was so frustrated because I make the same mistakes over and over again up until now

When I learned English atfor the first time, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistake over and over again still, which still happens now. When I learned English for the first time, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistake over and over again, which still happens now.

IThe first time I tried to learned English at the first time, I was, I would get so frustrated because I would madke the same mistakes over and over again still now. The first time I tried to learn English, I would get so frustrated because I would make the same mistakes over and over again.

IWhen I began learneding English at the first time, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistakes over and over again still, and even still make them now. When I began learning English at first, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistakes over and over again, and even still make them now.

IWhen was learneding English atfor the first time, I was so frustrated because I still made the same mistake over and over again still now When was learning English for the first time, I was so frustrated because I still made the same mistake over and over again

IWhen I started learneding English atfor the first time, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistake over and over again, and still do now When I started learning English for the first time, I was so frustrated because I made the same mistake over and over again, and still do now

1. You're using "I learned English at the first time" as a setting in time, so you need to put "When" before it 2. Since you're still learning English, the action isn't done, so it's better to talk about "when you started learning" rather than "when you learned", as the latter implies being finished with something. 3. The phrase is "for the first time" rather than "at the first time"

I am learneding English atfor the first time,. I wasam so frustrated because I madekeep making the same mistake over and over again stilleven now. I am learning English for the first time. I am so frustrated because I keep making the same mistake over and over again even now.

I am learning Japanese myself so I totally understand the frustration.