Jan. 12, 2022
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In my impression, the United States is almost a perfect country with highly developed technology and powerful strength.
People from all over the world seem to tend to go to America and live there.
I was a little shocked after hearing from you because I didn’t expect this situation in the US.
China has an old saying “家家有本难念的经” (jiā jiā yóu běn nán niàn de jīng) It means every family has their difficulties. So maybe as to countries, it’s the same situation.
Anyway, no matter how difficult it is, I still hope the United States is able to change the unideal situation and return to a prosperous America.
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<p><span>Very true. In the United States, it’s a major problem because of drugs and violence.. This entire country’s outlook on mental health is so bad... They don’t consider that being stuck on a phone all day alters the body’s energies to be more susceptible to depression and other issues. Social media doesn’t help either.</span></p>
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In my impressopinion, the United States is almost a perfect country with highly developed technology and powerful strength.
In my opinion, the United States is almost a perfect country with highly developed technology and powerful strength.
In English, we usually say "In my opinion" to express what we think about a situation.
People from all over the world seem to tendwant to go to America and live there.
People from all over the world want to go to America and live there.
"to tend to go' isin't a good way to phrase.
I was a little shocked after hearing from you because I didn’t expect this situation in the US.
China has an old saying “家家有本难念的经” (jiā jiā yóu běn nán niàn de jīng) It means every family has their difficulties.
So maybe as to, in other countries, it’s the same situation.
So maybe, in other countries, it’s the same situation.
just a quick fix. (not really a mistake)
Anyway, no matter how difficult it is, I still hope the United States is able to change the unideal situation and return to a prosperous America.
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Great work here, be careful with how you phrase your opinion, and try to make expressions as short as possible. Well done.
Jan. 12, 2022
thank you very much.
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In my impression, the United States is almost a perfect country with highly developed technology and powerful strength.
In my In English, we usually say "In my opinion" to express what we think about a situation. |
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People from all over the world seem to tend to go to America and live there.
People from all over the world "to tend to go' isin't a good way to phrase. |
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I was a little shocked after hearing from you because I didn’t expect this situation in the US. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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China has an old saying “家家有本难念的经” (jiā jiā yóu běn nán niàn de jīng) It means every family has their difficulties. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So maybe as to countries, it’s the same situation.
So maybe just a quick fix. (not really a mistake) |
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Anyway, no matter how difficult it is, I still hope the United States is able to change the unideal situation and return to a prosperous America. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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