Jan. 18, 2023
The impact of the increasing elderly on society
One problem related to population aging is that the medical cost will increase dramatically and impose a burden on taxpayers. The need for medical care as well as the spending on it tends to increase with age. Therefore, the government should increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget for other essential services, such as education.
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The impact on society of the increasing elderly on societye in the population of elderly people
The impact on society of the increase in the population of elderly people
alternative: The Societal Impact of an Aging Population
One problem related to population aging is that (the) medical costs will increase dramatically and impose a burden on taxpayers. One problem related to population aging is that (the) medical costs will increase dramatically and impose a burden on taxpayers.
The need for medical care as well as the spending on it tends to increase with age.
Therefore, the government should (will be forced to?) increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget(s) for other essential services, such as education. Therefore, the government should (will be forced to?) increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget(s) for other essential services, such as education.
“Should” sounds like you feel this is the right thing for the government to do. Is this what you mean?
Jan. 20, 2023
Thanks!
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The Impact of the Increasing Elderly on Society
Captailize most words in a title. I followed the MLA styling for this title, which is what I use in college.
One problem related to population aging is that the medical cost will increase dramatically andDue to the increasing average population, one clear issue is the dramatic increase of medical costs, impose aing burdens on taxpayers.
Due to the increasing average population, one clear issue is the dramatic increase of medical costs, imposing burdens on taxpayers.
The original is fine, but I am improving the phrasing here.
The need for medical care as well as the spending on it tends to increase with ageWith an increase in age, the need for medical care and its costs will rise too.
With an increase in age, the need for medical care and its costs will rise too.
Again, I improved the phrasing here to connect to the previous sentence more.
Therefore, the government sh[would have]/[are forced] to increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget for other essential services, such as education.
Therefore, the government [would have]/[are forced] to increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget for other essential services such as education.
Jan. 20, 2023
Thanks for your correction!
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The impact of the increasing elderly on society
The Captailize most words in a title. I followed the MLA styling for this title, which is what I use in college.
The impact on society of the increas alternative: The Societal Impact of an Aging Population |
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One problem related to population aging is that the medical cost will increase dramatically and impose a burden on taxpayers.
The original is fine, but I am improving the phrasing here. One problem related to population aging is that (the) medical costs will increase dramatically and impose a burden on taxpayers. One problem related to population aging is that (the) medical costs will increase dramatically and impose a burden on taxpayers. |
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The need for medical care as well as the spending on it tends to increase with age.
Again, I improved the phrasing here to connect to the previous sentence more. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, the government should increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget for other essential services, such as education.
Therefore, the government Therefore, the government should (will be forced to?) increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget(s) for other essential services, such as education. Therefore, the government should (will be forced to?) increase spending on elderly care and cut the budget(s) for other essential services, such as education. “Should” sounds like you feel this is the right thing for the government to do. Is this what you mean? |
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