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Camira

July 14, 2025

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Today was holiday of school.
I had BBQ outside today.
It was very delicious.
Actually, I ate roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.
I resented my mother who ate meat next to me.
I downloaded Duolingo as language study app.


今日は学校の休日だった。
私は今日外でBBQをした
とても美味しかったのだが、私はおなかがきつかった
実は昨日作ったロールケーキを先に食べていたのだ。
私は隣で食べている母親が恨めしく思った。
それと私はDuolingoという言語学習アプリをダウンロードした。

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I resentedwas annoyed by my mother, who ate the meat next to mebefore I could.

"resent" is a very strong word! It makes it sound like you dislike your mother. It would be better to use 'annoyed' and best to also explain why.

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Camira

July 15, 2025

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Thank you so much!

Today was holiday ofthere was no school.

I had a BBQ outside today.

Actually, I ate a roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.

I downloaded Duolingo as a language study app.

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Camira

July 15, 2025

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thank you so much!

7/14

Today was holiday of schoola school holiday.

I had BBQ outside today.

It was very delicious.

Actually, I ate roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.

I resented my mother who ate meat next to me.

I downloaded Duolingo asto study language study apps.

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Camira

July 15, 2025

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thank you so much!

7/14

Today was holidaya school holiday (or: a day off of school).

I had BBQ outside today.

It was very delicious.

Actually, I ate roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.

"Swiss roll cake" would be more easily understood.

I resented my mother who ate meat next to me.

I downloaded Duolingo as language study app.

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I don't understand why you resented your mother (did she eat meat while you couldn't?), but it's nice to have a school holiday, isn't it?

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Camira

July 15, 2025

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I wanted to eat more so this is why I resented my mother who ate meat next to me.

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Camira

July 15, 2025

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Today was holiday of school.


Today was holiday of schoola school holiday.

Today was holidaya school holiday (or: a day off of school).

Today was holiday ofthere was no school.

I had BBQ outside today.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had a BBQ outside today.

It was very delicious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Actually, I ate roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Actually, I ate roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.

"Swiss roll cake" would be more easily understood.

Actually, I ate a roll cake yesterday before I had BBQ.

I resented my mother who ate meat next to me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I resentedwas annoyed by my mother, who ate the meat next to mebefore I could.

"resent" is a very strong word! It makes it sound like you dislike your mother. It would be better to use 'annoyed' and best to also explain why.

I downloaded Duolingo as language study app.


I downloaded Duolingo asto study language study apps.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I downloaded Duolingo as a language study app.

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