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Camira

July 13, 2025

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It is last day of Culture festival in this day. Not only students in my school but also students in other school and parent and children came to school. However I did some things as yesterday. It is fun for me to lost my coins to gamble. Then school festival is over and principal said my class is best in second student class. It is hard to tidy up school festival (By the way this daily is made in July 14)


この日は文化祭最終日だった。この日は学校の生徒だけでなく、他の学校の生徒や子供、親まで来ていた。ただ私のすることは昨日とは変わりがない。ギャンブルをして全てを失う、それが私の楽しみだ。そして文化祭が終わり私のクラスは2年生の中で最も装飾が凄いと校長先生から言われた。文化祭の片付けは大変であった。(ちなみにこの日記は7/14に作っています笑笑)

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MY GUESS: It is last day of Ca culture festival in this dayat my school.

Not only students in my school but also students in other school and parent and children came to schooSMOOTHER: Students from other schools, parents, current and prospective students came to our school to experience this festival.

However I did some things as yesterday.SUGGESTION: Revise this sentence to make it more specific . . . it is too vague. (Readers have no idea what you did.)

It is fun for me to lost my enjoyed tossing coins toand gambleing.

ThenFinally, our school festival is overhas finished and my principal said mythe our class iwas best in second studentyear class.

It iwas hard to tidy up the school festival (By the way this daily is made in July 14).

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Camira

July 14, 2025

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I did not enjoy tossing.I enjoyed to lose everything to gambling.Thank you!

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It is the last day of the Culture fFestival in this today.

Not only students in my school but also students in other school ands, parents, and children came to the school.

However, I did sothe same things as yesterday.

It is fun for me to loste my coins to gambleing.

Then the school festival iwas over and the principal said my class is the best inamong the second year student class.

It is hard to tidy up after the school festival (Bby the way this daily entry is made ion July 14).

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Camira

July 14, 2025

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thank you so much!

It isToday is the last day of the Culture festival in this day.

Not only students infrom my school but also students infrom other school ands, as well as parents and children came to school.

However I did some of the same things as yesterday.

It is fun for me to loste my coins to gambleing.

TWhen the school festival iwas over and, the principal said my class is best inwas the best among the second studentyear classes.

It iwas hard to tidy up after the school festival (By the way this daily iwas made ion July 14)

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寝ない限り、まだ13日だよ。ᕙ⁠(⁠⇀⁠‸⁠↼⁠‶⁠)⁠ᕗ

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Camira

July 13, 2025

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日本とインドの時差は4時間なので...笑

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Not only students in my school but also students in other school and parent and children came to school.


Not only students infrom my school but also students infrom other school ands, as well as parents and children came to school.

Not only students in my school but also students in other school ands, parents, and children came to the school.

Not only students in my school but also students in other school and parent and children came to schooSMOOTHER: Students from other schools, parents, current and prospective students came to our school to experience this festival.

However I did some things as yesterday.


However I did some of the same things as yesterday.

However, I did sothe same things as yesterday.

However I did some things as yesterday.SUGGESTION: Revise this sentence to make it more specific . . . it is too vague. (Readers have no idea what you did.)

It is fun for me to lost my coins to gamble.


It is fun for me to loste my coins to gambleing.

It is fun for me to loste my coins to gambleing.

It is fun for me to lost my enjoyed tossing coins toand gambleing.

Then school festival is over and principal said my class is best in second student class.


TWhen the school festival iwas over and, the principal said my class is best inwas the best among the second studentyear classes.

Then the school festival iwas over and the principal said my class is the best inamong the second year student class.

ThenFinally, our school festival is overhas finished and my principal said mythe our class iwas best in second studentyear class.

It is hard to tidy up school festival (By the way this daily is made in July 14)


It iwas hard to tidy up after the school festival (By the way this daily iwas made ion July 14)

It is hard to tidy up after the school festival (Bby the way this daily entry is made ion July 14).

It iwas hard to tidy up the school festival (By the way this daily is made in July 14).

It is last day of Culture festival in this day.


It isToday is the last day of the Culture festival in this day.

It is the last day of the Culture fFestival in this today.

MY GUESS: It is last day of Ca culture festival in this dayat my school.

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