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Today was Culture festival day. However we need to see 30s short movie and performance so we were not free.First I explain what we will do in Culture festival. There are “exhibitions” in each class.”exhibitions”are such as Haunted house, photo spot, gambling house and so on. Also people in each class made video in 30 seconds and advertised their class by watching movie.For example, they performed characters that is named 『愛♡スクリーム』and japanese fashion to advertised.(『愛♡スクリーム』 is game and anime from Lovelive. ) I was surprised that video of first students in this year is high quality. There were performance in outside and we watched on blue seat, it was not easy for me to watch it, so I talked with my friends.
今日は文化祭だった。しかし私たちは30sショートムービーと劇を見る必要があったため私達は自由ではなかった。まず文化祭で何をやるか説明しよう。文化祭では各クラスが『展示』を行う。展示とはお化け屋敷であったり、写真を撮るスポットであったり、またはギャンブル場であったり、様々だ。そして各クラスが三十秒の動画を作って宣伝するといったものだ。例を出すと、日本で流行った『愛♡スクリーム』(ラブライブ!というアニメ、ゲームが発祥の曲です。)の出演キャラになり切って宣伝していた。今年の一年生は動画が凝っており驚かされた。劇は外でやっており、ブルーシートの上で見るのだが、見にくいため友達と雑談していた。
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For example, they performed characters that is named 『愛♡スクリーム』and japanese fashion to advertiseddid a popular performance called "Love ♡ Scream" which is (was?) popular in Japan.
"Love ♡ Scream" (if you want English - otherwise the Japanese is ok)
or "Ai ♡ Scream" (but honestly this sounds funny - like "ice cream")
(『愛♡スクリーム』 is game and anime from Lovelive. )The anime is called "Love Live!" and the game is from the song. The students were advertising themselves as characters in the show.
I am probably not young enough to explain this correctly. Hopefully this is closer to what you wanted to say.
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However we need to see 30s short movie and performance so we were not free.First I explain what we will do in Culture festival. However we needed to I think you mean "short 30 second movie clips"? Don't know if it's one or many (assuming more than one so pluralized it). I think you mean you had to watch the videos/performances before everyone could participate in the festival. |
There are “exhibitions” in each class.”exhibitions”are such as Haunted house, photo spot, gambling house and so on. There are “exhibitions” in each class. |
Also people in each class made video in 30 seconds and advertised their class by watching movie.For example, they performed characters that is named 『愛♡スクリーム』and japanese fashion to advertised.
"Love ♡ Scream" (if you want English - otherwise the Japanese is ok) or "Ai ♡ Scream" (but honestly this sounds funny - like "ice cream") |
(『愛♡スクリーム』 is game and anime from Lovelive. )
I am probably not young enough to explain this correctly. Hopefully this is closer to what you wanted to say. |
I was surprised that video of first students in this year is high quality. I was surprised |
There were performance in outside and we watched on blue seat, it was not easy for me to watch it, so I talked with my friends. The |
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