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April 10, 2023

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook. Please correct me so that I can sound like a native. ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


ๆณฃใ„ใกใ‚ƒใ„ใใ†
I might cry.

ใ‚ใƒผใ‚‚ใ†ๆบขใ‚Œใกใ‚ƒใ†
I'm tearing up.

ใคใ„ใ•ใฃใใฏใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†
Thank you for just now!


b: Sorry I couldn't go today. Let me know again next time, please.
a: Of course!

ใŠใ˜ใ„ใกใ‚ƒใ‚“ใƒใƒƒใƒ•ใ‚กใƒญใƒผใฏ็นๆฎ–่ƒฝๅŠ›ใ‚‚ใชใ„ใ—ใ€ๅฅณๆ€งใ‚’ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ—ใŸใ‚‰ใ„ใ‚‰ใชใ„ๅญ˜ๅœจใ ใ‹ใ‚‰็พคใ‚Œใ‹ใ‚‰่ฟฝใ„ๅ‡บใ•ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใฃใฆใ—ใฃใฆใŸ๏ผŸๆ‚ฒใ—ใ™ใŽใชใ„๏ผŸ

Did you know that when a buffalo becomes an old man, he can no longer reproduce, and is considered unwanted by the women, so they kick him out of the herd? Isn't that too sad?

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

I might cry.

I'm tearing up.

Thank you for just now!

b: Sorry I couldn't go today.

Let me know again next time, please.

ใพใŸใ€
Please let me know when you go again.

a: Of course!

Did you know that when a buffalo becomes an old manold, he can no longer reproduce, and so is considered unwanteddesirable by the womenfemales, so they kick him out of the herd?

ใ‹ใ‚ใ„ใใ†ใงใ™ใญใ€‚

Isn't that toso sad?

ใฏใ„ใ€ใใ†ใงใ™๏ผ

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sho

April 13, 2023

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ๆ‚ฒใ—ใ„ใงใ™ใ‚ˆใญ๐Ÿ˜ญใ€€ๆทปๅ‰Šใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†ใ”ใ–ใ„ใพใ™๏ผ๏ผ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the kind of English you would find in a textbook.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Please correct me so that I can sound like a native.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ๆณฃใ„ใกใ‚ƒใ„ใใ†


I might cry.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ใ‚ใƒผใ‚‚ใ†ๆบขใ‚Œใกใ‚ƒใ†


I'm tearing up.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ใคใ„ใ•ใฃใใฏใ‚ใ‚ŠใŒใจใ†


Thank you for just now!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

b: Sorry I couldn't go today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let me know again next time, please.


Let me know again next time, please.

ใพใŸใ€ Please let me know when you go again.

a: Of course!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ใŠใ˜ใ„ใกใ‚ƒใ‚“ใƒใƒƒใƒ•ใ‚กใƒญใƒผใฏ็นๆฎ–่ƒฝๅŠ›ใ‚‚ใชใ„ใ—ใ€ๅฅณๆ€งใ‚’ใ‹ใ‚‰ใ—ใŸใ‚‰ใ„ใ‚‰ใชใ„ๅญ˜ๅœจใ ใ‹ใ‚‰็พคใ‚Œใ‹ใ‚‰่ฟฝใ„ๅ‡บใ•ใ‚Œใ‚‹ใฃใฆใ—ใฃใฆใŸ๏ผŸๆ‚ฒใ—ใ™ใŽใชใ„๏ผŸ


Did you know that when a buffalo becomes an old man, he can no longer reproduce, and is considered unwanted by the women, so they kick him out of the herd?


Did you know that when a buffalo becomes an old manold, he can no longer reproduce, and so is considered unwanteddesirable by the womenfemales, so they kick him out of the herd?

ใ‹ใ‚ใ„ใใ†ใงใ™ใญใ€‚

Isn't that too sad?


Isn't that toso sad?

ใฏใ„ใ€ใใ†ใงใ™๏ผ

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