Nov. 14, 2021
Put Good Things Around You
These days I had a lot of stress during working.
I used to practice a classical instrument and swam pool near my house.
However, I am not able to do anything because of COVID-19.
One day, my coworker advised one thing.
"Put good things around you.
If you are surrounded by good things, you will feel happy and it will reduce your stress."
Then, I changed my clothes and my wallet first.
And I bought new hearing devices and store new favorite music in my phone.
I have also gotten nice and taste teas even though they are expensive.
As time passed, I feel good and become happy with them.
I think, this way is very good for reducing my stress.
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These days I hadve a lot of work stress during working.
These days I have a lot of work stress.
I used to practice a classical instrument and swamim in a pool near my house.
I used to practice a classical instrument and swim in a pool near my house.
However, I am not able to do anything because of COVID-19.
One day, my coworker advised one thing.
"Put good things around you.
If you are surrounded by good things, you will feel happy and it will reduce your stress.
"
Then, I changed my clothes and my wallet first.
Then, I changed my clothes.
And I bought new hearing devicdphones and store newd my favorite music ion my phone.
And I bought new headphones and stored my favorite music on my phone.
I have also gottenbought nice and tastey teas even though they are expensive.
I have also bought nice and tasty teas even though they are expensive.
Or you could say "I also bought the best teas....
As time passed, I feel good lt better gand becoame happy withier because of them.
As time passed, I felt better gand became happier because of them.
I think, this way is very good for reducing my stress. I think, this way is very good for reducing my stress.
Would more likely say "I think this was has been very good for reducing my stress"
What you have put is correct but when talking about changes you made would use the past tense
Nov. 14, 2021
Thank you so much of your advices.
Put Good Things Around You
These days I had a lot of stress duringat working.
These days I had a lot of stress at work.
I used to practice a classical instrument and swam at a pool near my house. I used to practice a classical instrument and swam at a pool near my house.
However, I am not able to do anything because of COVID-19.
"Put good things around you.
If you are surrounded by good things, you will feel happy and it will reduce your stress.
Then, I changed mybought myself new clothes and mya wallet first.
Then, I bought myself new clothes and a wallet first.
And I bought some new hearing devices and storeuploaded some of my new favorite music insongs to my phone.
And I bought some new hearing devices and uploaded some of my new favorite songs to my phone.
I have also gottenbought some nice and tastey teas even though they awere expensive.
I have also bought some nice and tasty tea even though they were expensive.
As time passed, I feelt good and becoame happy with them.
As time passed, I felt good and became happy with them.
I think, this way is very good foris a good way to reducinge my stress.
I think, this is a good way to reduce my stress.
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Nice job! Since you have some free time now, might as well correction Korean journals! Try to keep a positive ratio~
Nov. 14, 2021
Thank you so much. I will do that.
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Then, I changed my clothes and my wallet first.
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And I bought new hearing devices and store new favorite music in my phone.
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I have also gotten nice and taste teas even though they are expensive.
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As time passed, I feel good and become happy with them.
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I think, this way is very good for reducing my stress.
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