May 18, 2021
Wrong-Way Driving
In Japan, decreasing birth rate and an aging population are big problems. Related to it, there are many accidents caused by a car with old people. The driving ability weakens as people get older. They tend to mistake accel as brake or overlook traffic signs.
Driving in the wrong direction on highway is not rare. I heard a story that I thought it's a joke at first. An old man was driving on highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully. His family worried about him and phoned him. He said "It's alright, but all cars are going the wrong way! " In fact, the dangerous car was his one. He believed he never made a mistake.
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Wrong-Way Driving
In Japan, decreasing birth rate and an aging population are big problems.
Related to it, therethis are many accidents caused by a car withs involving old people.
Related to this are many accidents caused by cars involving old people.
We don't tend to overuse commas when writing essays in modern English.
The driving abilityPeople's ability to drive weakens as peoplethey get older.
People's ability to drive weakens as they get older.
They tend to mistake accel aseration for brakeing or overlook traffic signs.
They tend to mistake acceleration for braking or overlook traffic signs.
Driving in the wrong direction on the highway is not rare. Driving in the wrong direction on the highway is not rare.
I heard a story that I thought it'was a joke at first.
I heard a story that I thought was a joke at first.
This is the subjunctive mood in English
An old man was driving on the highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully. An old man was driving on the highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully.
His family worried about him and phoned him.
He said "It's alright, but all the cars are going the wrong way! " He said "It's alright, but all the cars are going the wrong way! "
In fact, the dangerous car was his one.
He believed he never made a mistake.
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May 19, 2021
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Wrong-Way Driving This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In Japan, decreasing birth rate and an aging population are big problems. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Related to it, there are many accidents caused by a car with old people.
Related to We don't tend to overuse commas when writing essays in modern English. |
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The driving ability weakens as people get older.
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They tend to mistake accel as brake or overlook traffic signs.
They tend to mistake accel |
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Driving in the wrong direction on highway is not rare. Driving in the wrong direction on the highway is not rare. Driving in the wrong direction on the highway is not rare. |
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I heard a story that I thought it's a joke at first.
I heard a story that I thought This is the subjunctive mood in English |
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An old man was driving on highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully. An old man was driving on the highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully. An old man was driving on the highway, and the news said there was a vehicle driving the wrong way, so you should drive carefully. |
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His family worried about him and phoned him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He said "It's alright, but all cars are going the wrong way! " He said "It's alright, but all the cars are going the wrong way! " He said "It's alright, but all the cars are going the wrong way! " |
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In fact, the dangerous car was his one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He believed he never made a mistake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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