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Feb. 20, 2026

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Harry Poter and the Potion Madness

Today had Potions class with Professor Snape. In class Snape said: "Today you will make a Sleeping Draught." It´s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions. Sleeping Draught Recipe: Over the basic potion base we had practiced,
- Add four valerian roots
-Stir five time clockwise
-Add two drops of lavender oil
- Heat for five minutes
- Stir counter-clockwise three times

Harry and Hermione made aceptable your potion, but Ron added a little more lavender and Neville add peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong. The most affect was Neville, because he had read book and removed 10 points. They thought Snape is not fair but he thing "Life is not fair".

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In class Snape said: "Today you will make a Sleeping Draught."

Sleeping Draught Recipe:

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Add four valerian roots

-Stir five time clockwise

-Add two drops of lavender oil

- Heat for five minutes

- Stir counter-clockwise three times

It´s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions.

Sleeping Draught Recipe:

Add four valerian roots

-Add two drops of lavender oil

- Heat for five minutes

- Stir counter-clockwise three times

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Today had Potions class with Professor Snape.


Today Harry had Potions class with Professor Snape. Today Harry had Potions class with Professor Snape.

Today they had Potions class with Professor Snape. Today they had Potions class with Professor Snape.

In class Snape said: "Today you will make a Sleeping Draught."


In class, Snape said: "Today, you will make a Sleeping Draught." In class, Snape said: "Today, you will make a Sleeping Draught."

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It´s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions.


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It´'s a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions. It's a simple potion but only if you follow the instructions.

Sleeping Draught Recipe:


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Over the basic potion base we had practiced,


OverInto the basic potion base we had practiced, Into the basic potion base we had practiced,

OverStarting with the basic potion base we had practiced,... Starting with the basic potion base we had practiced...

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Add four valerian roots


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-Stir five time clockwise


-Stir five time clockwiseclockwise five times -Stir clockwise five times

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-Add two drops of lavender oil


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- Heat for five minutes


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- Stir counter-clockwise three times


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Harry and Hermione made aceptable your potion, but Ron added a little more lavender and Neville add peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong.


Harry and Hermione made acceptable your potions, but Ron added a little moretoo much lavender, and Neville added peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong. Harry and Hermione made acceptable potions, but Ron added a little too much lavender, and Neville added peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong.

Harry and Hermione made acceptable your potions, but Ron added a little more lavender, and Neville added peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong. Harry and Hermione made acceptable potions, but Ron added a little more lavender, and Neville added peppermint by mistake and he stirred it wrong.

The most affect was Neville, because he had read book and removed 10 points.


The most affected was Neville, because he had read the (wrong) book and removedlost 10 points. The most affected was Neville, because he had read the (wrong) book and lost 10 points.

The one most affected was Neville, because he had read the book and removehad 10 points removed. The one most affected was Neville, because he had read the book and had 10 points removed.

They thought Snape is not fair but he thing "Life is not fair".


They thought Snape iwas not fair but he thingought, "Life is not fair"." They thought Snape was not fair but he thought, "Life is not fair."

They thought Snape is not was being unfair but he thingold then "Life is not fair"." They thought Snape was being unfair but he told then "Life is not fair."

I think we use "not fair" for objects more than for people, because "not fair" can sound like "not fair" as in the definition of fair that means "a pleasing appearance" I think "Snape was not being fair" sounds okay though, idk why

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