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Oct. 27, 2020

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Another favorite series

I have chosen American horror story because I really like horror series.
I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.
I like the special effects they make in most of the episodes.
One of my favorite episode is where they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.
American horror story is a thriller and horror series which is very popular with teenagers. It’s about many people who mostly aren’t normal . It takes place in America. The story is a bit scary. In this series, there is a very good looking boy who looks like my past crush,maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes.
I can promise you, you won’t forget this series so soon.The actors play the roles pretty good even if they have to play a psychopath. I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel ,that’s why I really like it and recommend it.

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Another favorite series

I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.

It takes place in America.

The story is a bit scary.

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panna

Oct. 28, 2020

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Another favorite series

I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.

It takes place in America.

The story is a bit scary.

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panna

Oct. 28, 2020

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Oct. 28, 2020

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Another favorite series


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I have chosen American horror story because I really like horror series.


I have chosen American hHorror sStory because I really like horror series. I have chosen American Horror Story because I really like horror series.

I have chosen American hHorror sStory because I really like horror series. I have chosen American Horror Story because I really like horror series.

I enjoy watching it because the scenes are pretty realistic and the costumes look very cool.


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I like the special effects they make in most of the episodes.


I like the special effects they make in most of the episodes. I like the special effects in most of the episodes.

I like the special effects they makuse in most of the episodes. I like the special effects they use in most of the episodes.

One of my favorite episode is where they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.


One of my favorite episodes is where they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped. One of my favorite episodes is where they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.

One of my favorite episodes is wheren they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped. One of my favorite episodes is when they are in a hotel and they get kidnapped.

A more natural way to say this would be: In one of my favorite episodes, they get kidnapped from a hotel.

American horror story is a thriller and horror series which is very popular with teenagers.


American hHorror sStory is a thriller and horror series which is very popular with teenagers. American Horror Story is a thriller and horror series which is very popular with teenagers.

American hHorror sStory is a thriller and horror series whichthat is very popular with teenagers. American Horror Story is a thriller and horror series that is very popular with teenagers.

It’s about many people who mostly aren’t normal .


It’s about many people who mostly aren’t normal . It’s about many people who mostly aren’t normal.

It’s about manya group of people who mostly aren’t normal . It’s about a group of people who aren’t normal.

It takes place in America.


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The story is a bit scary.


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In this series, there is a very good looking boy who looks like my past crush,maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes.


In this series, there is a very good -looking boy who looks like my past crush,; maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes. In this series, there is a very good-looking boy who looks like my past crush; maybe that’s why this series has caught my eye.

When you connect two independent clauses without a conjunction, you should use a semicolon rather than a comma.

In this series, there is a very good looking boy who looks like my past crush,m. Maybe that’s why this series has caught my eyes. In this series, there is a very good looking boy who looks like my past crush. Maybe that’s why this series caught my eye.

I can promise you, you won’t forget this series so soon.The actors play the roles pretty good even if they have to play a psychopath.


I can promise you, you won’t soon forget this series so soon. The actors play the roles pretty good even if they have to play a psychopath. I can promise you you won’t soon forget this series. The actors play the roles pretty good even if they have to play a psychopath.

I can promise you, you won’t forget this series so soon. The actors play the roles pretty goodwell even if they have to play a psychopath. I can promise you, you won’t forget this series so soon. The actors play the roles pretty well even if they have to play a psychopath.

A more natural way to say this “this series is hard to forget”

I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel ,that’s why I really like it and recommend it.


I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel; ,that’s why I really like it and recommend it. I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel; that’s why I really like it and recommend it.

I think some of the characters describe sometimes what we feel ,tsometimes. That’s why I really like it and recommend it. I think some of the characters describe what we feel sometimes. That’s why I really like it and recommend it.

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