I 'm super focused towardson reaching my dreams. I'm super focused on reaching my dreams.

I am super focused towards achieving my dreams. I am super focused towards achieving my dreams.

My Introduction. My Introduction

My name is mMokshita. My name is Mokshita.

My name is mMokshita. My name is Mokshita.

I'm 18 yerars old. I'm 18 years old.

I'm 18 yerars old. I'm 18 years old.

I love to do dance. I love to dance.

I'm a quite a good artist. I'm quite a good artist.

I like painting and traditional painting. I like painting and traditional painting.

I like painting and, particularly traditional painting. I like painting, particularly traditional painting.

I just want to completachieve my dream.s. I just want to achieve my dreams.

My goal is to become an IFS officer/member (INDIAN FORIEGN SERVICE). My goal is to become an IFS officer/member (INDIAN FORIEGN SERVICE).

Since IFS is the name of the organization, you need some kind of noun to indicate your place within the organization.

My goal is to become an IFS (INDIAN FORIEGN SERVICE). employee. My goal is to become an IFS (INDIAN FORIEGN SERVICE) employee.

My mom is super supportive and never givevoices any negative thoughts that canould demotivate me. My mom is super supportive and never voices any negative thoughts that could demotivate me.

My mom is super supportive and never gives me any negative thoughts that canmay demotivate me. My mom is super supportive and never gives me any negative thoughts that may demotivate me.

I have myan elder brother. I have an elder brother.

Who always annoys me. Who always annoys me.

I would combine these sentences into "I have my elder brother, who always annoys me."

So this is my cute little cute story on myself. So this is my cute little story on myself.

The sentence is fine as is, but when using "cute" and "little" together, we usually put "cute" first. I can't explain why that is, but it sounds more natural that way.

So this is my cute little cute story onf myself. So this is my cute little story of myself.