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I am Lisa a goth all my clothes a black and I haveMy name is Lisa. I'm a goth, I wear all black, have many piercedings and crazy Jjewellery howlike a nose ring and armbands. My name is Lisa. I'm a goth, I wear all black, have many piercings and jewelry like a nose ring and armband.

I a'm Lisa, a goth all. All of my clothes are black and I have pierced andings, crazy Jewellery how, a nose ring and I wear armbands. I'm Lisa, a goth. All of my clothes are black and I have piercings, crazy Jewellery, a nose ring and I wear armbands.

I am Lisa, a goth a. All my clothes are black and I have piercedings and crazy Jewellery how, like a nose ring and armbandbracelets. I am Lisa, a goth. All my clothes are black and I have piercings and crazy Jewellery, like a nose ring and bracelets.

I am Lisa, a goth a. All my clothes are black and I have piercedings and crazy Jjewellery how. Like a nose ring and armbands. I am Lisa, a goth. All my clothes are black and I have piercings and crazy jewellery. Like a nose ring and armbands.

You need punctuation otherwise it sounds unnatural and a long sentence. "Like" for listing items not "how".

They aren't so socialGoth style is not popular and haves a negatives image. Goth style is not popular and has a negative image.

They aren't so social and have a negativIt's quite antisocial and has it's downsides . It's quite antisocial and has it's downsides.

That's how I'd write it.

TheyGoths aren't so social and have a few negatives points. Goths aren't so social and have a few negative points.

They aren't so socially acceptable and have a negatives . They aren't so socially acceptable and have negatives .

I wouldn't use "social" to describe an object, it's more natural to use "social" to describe a person. I would say "socially acceptable". No need for indefinite article ("a") because "negatives" is plural.

They judgment about normal person and are very independentlyare judged by normal person. They are judged by normal person.

Is this about judgement from normal people?

They attract judgments about what a normal person and are veryshould be, yet bring independentlyce. They attract judgments about what a normal person should be, yet bring independence.

They judgment aboute normal personople and are very independently. They judge normal people and are very independent.

Normal people judge Goths just as much, of not more )

They are judgemental about normal personople and are very independently. They are judgemental about normal people and are very independent.

So I assume you are talking about goths here. You can't just say "they judgement", "judgement" is a noun. If you want to describe someone, you will require an adjective in this context (judgemental). Similar to "independent". "People" to refer to everyone, the general public etc. "Person" is only talking about one person, it's unnatural to refer to just one person.

Goths are sometimes also only break personhave an identity crisis and felel oneself a bit uncertainthey don't really know who they are. Goths are sometimes have an identity crisis and feel they don't really know who they are.

Goth are sometimes also only break person andoken people and simply felel oneself a bit uncertainunsure of themselves. Goth are sometimes only broken people and simply feel unsure of themselves.

Goths are sometimes also only break person and fell ones"broken" people and feelf a bit uncertaininsecure. Goths are sometimes "broken" people and feel a bit insecure.

I put broken in quotes, as it's not literal. Also, everyone is broken in their own way

Goths are sometimes also only break person and fell oneself a bit uncertain. Goths are sometimes also only break person and fell oneself a bit uncertain.

When you want to generally talk about something, in this context goths, we refer to a plural form. I'm not sure what you are trying to say here.

But they arecan also be evil, rebellious andor angry . But they can also be evil, rebellious or angry .

ButHowever they arecan also be evil, rebellious and angry . However they can also be evil, rebellious and angry .

Try to avoid starting a sentence with 'But'. I was taught not to in school! However/yet usually work instead.

But they are also evildark, rebellious and angry . But they are also dark, rebellious and angry .

Evil? Nah. All my goth friends were real nice. When making a list, use commas!

But they are also evil, rebellious and angry . But they are also evil, rebellious and angry .

Don't forget commas.

My favourite music is rock and I play guitar and; my favourite school subject is art . My favourite music is rock and I play guitar; my favourite school subject is art .

favorite is the British spelling, favorite is American

My favourite genre of music is rock and, I play guitar and my favourite school subject is art . My favourite genre of music is rock, I play guitar and my favourite school subject is art.

or 'and Art is my favourite subject at school.'

My favourite music is rock and, I play guitar and my favourite school subject is art . My favourite music is rock, I play guitar and my favourite school subject is art .

My favourite music is rock and I play guitar and m. My favourite school subject is art . My favourite music is rock and I play guitar. My favourite school subject is art .

usually we don't repeat "and" more than once in a sentence.

I malike to funmake graffityi and picturert. I like to make graffiti art.

I make to funenjoy doing/making graffityi and painting pictures. I enjoy doing/making graffiti and painting pictures.

I make to fundo graffityi and draw pictures for fun. I do graffiti and draw pictures for fun.

I make to fun graffityi and pictures. I make fun graffiti and pictures.