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I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip in Australia.

The last day of my travel Australia, I went to Manly beach by ferry boat.
I've been the beach ones so the scenery is looked familiar.

We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.
We could see Opera house and harbor bridge. A view from a ferry boat was amazing. So I love Sydney.

It was superb view!

It took around 30minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat.

We walked along the beach and we ate fish and chips. That was soooo delicious. I couldn't eat all so I feed it sea gull.


オーストラリア旅行の続きです。

旅行の最後の日は、シドニーのマンリービーチに行きました。以前にそのビーチに行ったことがあるので、とても懐かしかったです。

マンリービーチまでフェリーで行きました。
ハーバーブリッジやオペラハウスが見えました。素敵な眺めでした。フェリーからの眺めは最高でした。

30分間フェリーに乗りました。
海岸沿いを歩いてからフィッシュ&チップスを食べました。美味しかったです。
全部食べきれなかったのでカモメにあげました。

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We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.

That was soooo delicious.

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We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.

It was superb view!

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We walked along the beach and we ate fish and chips.


We walked along the beach, and we ate fish and chips. We walked along the beach, and we ate fish and chips.

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We walked along the beach and we ate fish and chips. We walked along the beach and ate fish and chips.

That was soooo delicious.


ThaIt was soooo delicious. It was soooo delicious.

Thate meal was soooo delicious. The meal was so delicious.

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I couldn't eat all so I feed it sea gull.


I couldn't eat all so I feed itof it, so I fed the rest to a sea gull. I couldn't eat all of it, so I fed the rest to a sea gull.

I couldn't eat it all so I feed it to a sea gull. I couldn't eat it all so I fed it to a seagull.

Lucky seagull! : )

I couldn't eat the entire meall so I feed it to sea gulls. I couldn't eat the entire meal so I feed it to sea gulls.

I couldn't eat it all so I feed it to the sea gulls. I couldn't eat it all so I fed it to the sea gulls.

Or "I couldn't finish it".

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So I love Sydney.


SoFor this reason, I love Sydney. For this reason, I love Sydney.

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So I love Sydney.! I love Sydney!

It was superb view!


It washad a superb view! It had a superb view!

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It was a superb view! It was a superb view!

It was a superb view! It was a superb view!

It took around 30minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat.


It took around 30 minutes from the wharf to Manly wWharf by ferry boat. It took around 30 minutes from the wharf to Manly Wharf by ferry.

It took around 30 minutes (to get) from the wharf to Manly wWharf by ferry boat. It took around 30 minutes (to get) from the wharf to Manly Wharf by ferry boat.

I put "to get" in parentheses because it sounds more natural but is not wrong without it.

It took around 30 minutes from the wharf toto reach Manly wWharf by ferry boat. It took around 30 minutes to reach Manly Wharf by ferry boat.

It took around 30minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat. It took around 30minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by boat.

You can say "by ferry" or "by boat". Saying "by ferry boat" sounds strange.

It took around 30 minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry boat. It took around 30 minutes from the wharf to Manly wharf by ferry.

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I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip in Australia.


I'm going to talk about the continuationremainder of my trip into Australia. I'm going to talk about the remainder of my trip to Australia.

I'm going to talk about the continuationrest of my trip into Australia. I'm going to talk about the rest of my trip to Australia.

I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip while traveling in Australia. I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip while traveling in Australia.

I'm going to talk about the continuationnext leg of my trip in Australia. I'm going to talk about the next leg of my trip in Australia.

Each part of a journey is called a leg. You could also just say "I'm going to talk about the next part of my Australia trip".

I'm going to talk about the continuationrest of my trip into Australia. I'm going to talk about the rest of my trip to Australia.

The last day of my travel Australia, I went to Manly beach by ferry boat.


TOn the last day of my travelip to Australia, I went to Manly bBeach by ferry boat. On the last day of my trip to Australia, I went to Manly Beach by ferry.

Manly Beach is a proper noun.

TOn the last day of my travel to Australia, I went to Manly bBeach by ferry boat. On the last day of my travel to Australia, I went to Manly Beach by ferry boat.

Capitalization in English is tricky. For proper nouns (the names of places for example), all parts should be capitalized, not just the name.

The last day of my travels in Australia, I went to Manly beach byvia ferry boat. The last day of my travels in Australia, I went to Manly beach via ferry.

TOn the last day of my travel Australia, I went to Manly beach by ferry boatthe trip I took a ferry to Manly beach. On the last day of the trip I took a ferry to Manly beach.

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I've been the beach ones so the scenery is looked familiar.


I've been theo this beach onesbefore, so the scenery is looked familiar. I've been to this beach before, so the scenery looked familiar.

I've been to the beach onesce, so the scenery is looked familiar. I've been to the beach once, so the scenery looked familiar.

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I've been to the beach once befores so the scenery is looked familiar. I've been to the beach once before so the scenery looked familiar.

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We got on a ferry boat from a wharf.


We got on aboarded the ferry boat from a wharf. We boarded the ferry from a wharf.

We got ontook a ferry boat from athe wharf. We took a ferry boat from the wharf.

We got ontook a ferry boat from athe wharf. We took a ferry boat from the wharf.

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We could see Opera house and harbor bridge.


We could see the Opera hHouse and hHarbour bBridge. We could see the Opera House and Harbour Bridge.

We could see Sydney Opera hHouse and hHarbor bBridge. We could see Sydney Opera House and Harbor Bridge.

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A view from a ferry boat was amazing.


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