Oct. 8, 2020
The Simpsons
I am hooked on The Simpsons. The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, such as Bart struggles with his studies so that he can be promoted to fifth grade. When I first saw the episode that Bart is so emotional about his test result, I was gobsmacked! Because at that time I was still a little boy, and it had a great resonance for me. I also love the first episode of the first season, you know, Homer and Bart first meet Santa's Little Helper, and then they pet him. It is so touching and a bit nostalgic.
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The Simpsons
I am hooked on The Simpsons.
The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, such as Bartwhen Bart was strugglesing with his studies so that he canand wanted to be promoted to the fifth grade.
The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, such as when Bart was struggling with his studies and wanted to be promoted to the fifth grade.
I changed your sentence to make sense. You cannot be struggling with your studies to be promoted to the 5th grade. If you are struggling, it means you WON"T make it to the 5th grade.
When I first saw the episode thatwhere Bart iwas so emotional about his test result, I was gobsmacked!
When I first saw the episode where Bart was so emotional about his test result, I was gobsmacked!
Just so you know, the expression gobsmacked is very British. If you are learning British English, that is fine, but for an American reader, this is a weird expression.
Because at that time, I was still a little boy, and it had a great resonance forresonated with me.
Because at that time, I was still a little boy, and it resonated with me.
I also love the first episode of the first season, you know,when Homer and Bart first meet and petted Santa's Little Helper, and then they pet him.
I also love the first episode of the first season, when Homer and Bart first met and petted Santa's Little Helper.
It iwas so touching and a bit nostalgic.
It was so touching and a bit nostalgic.
Oct. 10, 2020
thanks so much!
The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, such aswith episodes such as the one where Bart struggles with his studies so that he can be promoted to fifth grade.
The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, with episodes such as the one where Bart struggles with his studies so that he can be promoted to fifth grade.
When I first saw the episode that Bart isBart being so emotional about his test result, I was gobsmacked!
When I first saw Bart being so emotional about his test result, I was gobsmacked!
Because at that time I was still a little boy, and it had a great resonance forreally resonated with me.
Because at that time I was still a little boy, and it really resonated with me.
I also love the first episode of the first season, you know, Homer and Bart first meet Santa's Little Helper, and then they pet him.
It is so touching and a bit nostalgic.
Oct. 10, 2020
Thanks a lot!
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The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, such as Bart struggles with his studies so that he can be promoted to fifth grade.
The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic,
The earlier seasons of this show are fantastic, such as I changed your sentence to make sense. You cannot be struggling with your studies to be promoted to the 5th grade. If you are struggling, it means you WON"T make it to the 5th grade. |
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When I first saw the episode that Bart is so emotional about his test result, I was gobsmacked!
When I first saw
When I first saw the episode Just so you know, the expression gobsmacked is very British. If you are learning British English, that is fine, but for an American reader, this is a weird expression. |
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Because at that time I was still a little boy, and it had a great resonance for me.
Because at that time I was still a little boy, and it
Because at that time, I was still a little boy, and it |
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But to be honest, I find it quite strenuous to see the later seasons especially those after the twenty-fifth. |
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I also love the first episode of the first season, you know, Homer and Bart first meet Santa's Little Helper, and then they pet him. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I also love the first episode of the first season, |
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It is so touching and a bit nostalgic. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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