Jan. 14, 2021
Journal 14/01/21
Sorry for not understanding you accurately. I was very puzzled at that moment, but I didn't seek information on that topic further. Recently, the temperature here has increased a lot and the highest temperature is 18 degrees Celsius. It has been sunny and a little windy. We can feel a kind of atmosphere in spring. Do you know the Chinese word 立春? For this year it is February 3rd. That is to say, there are only twenty days left. Lichun means that spring is starting, and after Lichun, the temperature begins to rise and never drops again. A two and half hour drive means 200 kilometers ride of the road in China, and it equals the distance from my hometown to the capital Hefei of Anhui province. Ice storm means 冰雹, and it rarely happens here. Sometimes, before snow, it happens a little, but just a little. I hope the day you go to the city will be very nice, and I hope you have a safe journey in a happy and joyful mood.
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Journal 14/01/21
Sorry for not misunderstanding you accurately.
Sorry for misunderstanding you.
What you wrote originally is correct, but a bit unnatural.
At that moment I was very puzzled at that moment, but I didn't seek further information on that topic further.
At that moment I was very puzzled, but I didn't seek further information on that topic.
Note: "that" topic is unspecified.
Recently, the temperature here has increased a lot and the highestdaily maximum temperature is 18 degrees Celsius.
Recently, the temperature here has increased a lot and the daily maximum temperature is 18 degrees Celsius.
It has been sunny and a little windy.
We can feel a kind of atmosphere in spring. We can feel a kind of atmosphere in spring.
This is correct, but too vague: what kind of atmosphere?
Do you know the Chinese word 立春?
For this year it is February 3rd.
That is to say, there are only twenty days left.
Lichun means that spring is startis the start of spring, andso after Lichun,wards the temperature begins to rise and neverdoesn't drops again until next year.
Lichun is the start of spring, so afterwards the temperature begins to rise and doesn't drop again until next year.
"never drops again" is not great; presumably, next winter it'll be cold again.
A two -and -a-half hour drive means 200 kilometers ride of the road in Chinaamounts to about 200 kilometers on Chinese roads, and it equ's also the distance from my hometown to Hefei, the capital Hefei of Anhui province.
A two-and-a-half hour drive amounts to about 200 kilometers on Chinese roads, and it's also the distance from my hometown to Hefei, the capital of Anhui province.
IThe Chinese word for "ice storm mean" is 冰雹, and ithey rarely happens here.
The Chinese word for "ice storm" is 冰雹, and they rarely happen here.
Sometimes, before it snows, it happens a little, but just a littlewe might have a minor ice storm.
Sometimes, before it snows, we might have a minor ice storm.
I hope the day you go to the city will be very nice, and I hope you have a safe journey inwith a happy and joyful mood.
I hope the day you go to the city will be very nice, and I hope you have a safe journey with a happy and joyful mood.
This would not be said naturally. We might say something like "When you visit the city, I hope you have a pleasant journey."
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Sorry for not understanding you accurately.
Sorry for What you wrote originally is correct, but a bit unnatural. |
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I was very puzzled at that moment, but I didn't seek information on that topic further.
At that moment I was very puzzled Note: "that" topic is unspecified. |
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Recently, the temperature here has increased a lot and the highest temperature is 18 degrees Celsius.
Recently, the temperature here has increased a lot and the |
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It has been sunny and a little windy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We can feel a kind of atmosphere in spring. We can feel a kind of atmosphere in spring. We can feel a kind of atmosphere in spring. This is correct, but too vague: what kind of atmosphere? |
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Do you know the Chinese word 立春? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For this year it is February 3rd. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That is to say, there are only twenty days left. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Lichun means that spring is starting, and after Lichun, the temperature begins to rise and never drops again.
Lichun "never drops again" is not great; presumably, next winter it'll be cold again. |
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A two and half hour drive means 200 kilometers ride of the road in China, and it equals the distance from my hometown to the capital Hefei of Anhui province.
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Ice storm means 冰雹, and it rarely happens here.
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Sometimes, before snow, it happens a little, but just a little.
Sometimes, before it snows, |
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I hope the day you go to the city will be very nice, and I hope you have a safe journey in a happy and joyful mood.
I hope the day you go to the city will be very nice, and I hope you have a safe journey This would not be said naturally. We might say something like "When you visit the city, I hope you have a pleasant journey." |
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