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Meaning of life

I have thought many times about the meaning of life, but every time I fail to figure it out. Coming to this world is not our choice, and it's just an accident. We are carefree when we are kids. We are full of hope when we are young, but when we get old, we will think about this involuntarily.
Maybe it's meaningless at all, we shouldn't make it clear. Now that we come, we just enjoy the journey, do what we want, and don't think about it so much. Maybe happiness is just simple. Okay, go to bed and have a nice dream.

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Okay, go to bed and have a nice dream.

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Meaning of life

We are carefree when we are kids.

Okay, go to bed and have a nice dream.

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Meaning of life


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You generally need an article in front of a noun, especially if the noun is the subject of your topic.

I have thought many times about the meaning of life, but every time I fail to figure it out.


I have thought many times about the meaning of life, but everyach time I fail to figure it out. I have thought many times about the meaning of life, but each time I fail to figure it out.

'each' sounds more natural here

I have thought many times about the meaning of life, but everyach time I failed to figure it out. I have thought many times about the meaning of life, but each time I failed to figure it out.

Coming to this world is not our choice, and it's just an accident.


Coming to this world is not our choice, and; it's just an accident. Coming to this world is not our choice; it's just an accident.

Use of a semi colon is more effective here and makes the sentence have more impact. Using 'and' after a comma is called an Oxford comma. Personally I use an Oxford comma when joining a sentence to another sentence that uses 'and'. For example "Today i want to eat and drink, and go hiking" instead of "Today i want to eat and drink and go hiking".

ComBeing born into this world is not our choice, andrather it's just an accident. Being born into this world is not our choice, rather it's just an accident.

We are carefree when we are kids.


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We are full of hope when we are young, but when we get old, we will think about this involuntarily.


We are full of hope when we are young, but when we get old, we will think about thiour own lives involuntarily. We are full of hope when we are young, but when we get old, we will think about our own lives involuntarily.

perfect until 'this' - it's unclear what aspect of being young/old you're referencing. I've used 'our lives' but also thought about 'mortality'

We are full of hope when we are young, but whenas we get older, we willunconsciously think about this involuntarily.e meaning of life. We are full of hope when we are young, but as we get older, we unconsciously think about the meaning of life.

Maybe it's meaningless at all, we shouldn't make it clear.


Maybe it's meaningless atfter all, we shouldn't make it clearsense of it. Maybe it's meaningless after all, we shouldn't make sense of it.

'meaningless at all' feels like a word is missing, i'm not sure what you were trying to say here. I've changed the second part to 'make sense of it' to sound more natural.

Maybe it's meaningless at all, we shouldn't make it life doesn't mean anything at all, as its meaning if often unclear. Maybe life doesn't mean anything at all, as its meaning if often unclear.

my correction is a pure guess, as this sentence is not clear to me. In other words, I'm not sure what you're trying to say

Now that we come, we just enjoy the journey, do what we want, and don't think about it so much.


Now that we come, weare here, we should just enjoy the journey, do what we want, and don'not think about it so much. Now that we are here, we should just enjoy the journey, do what we want, and not think about it so much.

changed to 'we are here' since the rest of the sentence feels like the present tense (i.e. happening now). Added 'should' to make it into a suggestion. Oxford comma works great here to break up the sentence for easy reading :)

Now that we come, weare her, we should just enjoy the journey, do what we want, and don't think too much about it so much. Now that we are her, we should just enjoy the journey, do what we want, and don't think too much about it.

Maybe happiness is just simple.


Maybe achieving happiness is just that simple. Maybe achieving happiness is just that simple.

Okay, go to bed and have a nice dream.


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