Jan. 1, 2021
I have been studying for more than 25 years. People told me that an university degree was the path to success. Actually, all my generation grew believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our live, therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history. But it was an enormous lie.
All the things you will value more in your professional live aren't in an university syllabus. Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuation. I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuation frame. Is like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long. All the efforts I have done have no sense without mastering the art of persuation.
The aArt of pPersuatsion
The Art of Persuasion
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., are capitalized in the title.
I have been studying for more than 25 years. I have been studying for more than 25 years.
"I have" is also written as "I've".
People told me that an university degree was the path to success.
People told me that a university degree was the path to success.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment that we could make in order to improve our lives, therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment that we could make in order to improve our lives, therefore we are the best educated generation in history.
"We are" is most commonly written as "we're".
But it was an enormous lie.
All the things you will value more in your professional livfe aren't ion an university syllabus.
All the things you will value more in your professional life aren't on a university syllabus.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation, and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuatsion.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation, and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuasion.
"Are not" is commonly written as "Aren't".
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and in all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuation framesive way.
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and in all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuasive way.
I'm not sure what a "persuasion frame" is.
It's like if you are learning to swingm in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long.
It's like if you are learning to swim in a university class, without water, for 25 years.
A "swing" is a toy that kids have on playgrounds, where you use momentum in order to move yourself forward and backward.
"you are" is commonly written as "You're".
All the efforts I have donmade have no senpurpose without mastering the art of persuatsion.
All the efforts I have made have no purpose without the art of persuasion.
"I have" is commonly written as "I've".
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
The art of persuatsion
The art of persuasion
I have been studying for more than 25 years.
People told me that an university degree was the path to success.
People told me that a university degree was the path to success.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our live, tfe. Therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our life. Therefore, we are the best educated generation in history.
But it was an enormous lie.
All the things you will value more in your professional livfe aren't in an university syllabus.
All the things you will value more in your professional life aren't in a university syllabus.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuatsion.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuasion.
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuatsion frame.
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuasion frame.
It's like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long.
It's like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without water, for 25 years.
All the efforts I have done havmake no sense without mastering the art of persuatsion.
All the efforts I have done make no sense without mastering the art of persuasion.
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For the most part, your grammar and spelling was good. However, your sentences are a bit too long in some parts. Long sentences disrupt the flow of a paragraph and generally English speakers prefer shorter sentences. Also, I wasn't quite sure what you were trying to say. Like what do you mean by the art of persuasion? Perhaps it would help if you explained it more or gave examples.
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The art of persuation
The art of persua
The In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., are capitalized in the title. |
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I have been studying for more than 25 years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I have been studying for more than 25 years. I have been studying for more than 25 years. "I have" is also written as "I've". |
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People told me that an university degree was the path to success.
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People told me that a |
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Actually, all my generation grew believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our live, therefore, we are the best educated generation in the history.
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment to improve our li
Actually, all my generation grew up believing that a good education was the best investment that we could make in order to improve our lives, therefore "We are" is most commonly written as "we're". |
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But it was an enormous lie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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All the things you will value more in your professional live aren't in an university syllabus.
All the things you will value more in your professional li
All the things you will value more in your professional li |
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Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persuation.
Emotional intelligence, negotiation and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persua
Emotional intelligence, negotiation, and other soft skills are not taught in university, especially the art of persua "Are not" is commonly written as "Aren't". |
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I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persuation frame.
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persua
I have been studying for more than 25 years, and in all those years nobody told me that all the knowledge you have needs to be used in a persua I'm not sure what a "persuasion frame" is. |
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Is like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without whater, for 25 years long.
It's like if you are learning to swing in a university class, without w
It's like if you are learning to swi A "swing" is a toy that kids have on playgrounds, where you use momentum in order to move yourself forward and backward. "you are" is commonly written as "You're". |
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All the efforts I have done have no sense without mastering the art of persuation.
All the efforts I have done
All the efforts I have "I have" is commonly written as "I've". |
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