March 30, 2021
Finally I graduated from architecture school and I started to my own company although I am the only one who is currently working with me. It is funny when I wrote like that. The reason of the starting my own company, the first 3 years, the government let us to not pay taxes due to be young entrepreneur and I wanted to try my chance.
Now, I have a house project that drives me crazy. I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client who draws "drafts". I designed more than 4 house plan over starting from zero point. I am out of my power and I have a ugly a draft that they expected to me draw. I know, they don't have any aesthetic concept but still, I can't comprehend the reason of why would a person wanted to own a house something like that.
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Finally, I graduated from architecture school. I recently started my own company although I am its only employee.
The way you wrote the second part 'although I am the only.....working with me' is correct, but not many people would say it that way.
(It istruck me as funny when I wrote like that.)
(It struck me as funny when I wrote that.)
"(That was a funny sentence.)"
"(I chuckled when I wrote that.)"
The parentheses indicate that this is an aside, not intended to be part of the main meaning of the paragraph.
The reason of theI startinged my own company, the first 3 years, the government let us to not pay taxes due to be young entrepreneur and because our government encourages young entrepreneurs for the first 3 years after graduation by not levying taxes on such businesses. I wanted to tryake my chance.
I started my own company because our government encourages young entrepreneurs for the first 3 years after graduation by not levying taxes on such businesses. I wanted to take my chance.
It's a rather long sentence, so you might want to consider breaking it up like so:
"I started my own company because our government has a program to encourage young entrepreneurs. For the first 3 years after graduation, a business owner will not have to pay taxes."
Now, I have aMy first house project thatis drivesing me crazy.
My first house project is driving me crazy.
An alternative approach to this paragraph is to start with:
"Now, my first client is driving me crazy."
I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client whocan't stand the way they draws "drafts"."
I can't stand the way they draw "drafts."
'unexplainable anger' might also be translated as 'rage'
Another way to say the same thing is:
'I hate the way my first client brings me "drafts" for the design of their house.
I designed more than 4 house plan over starting from zero pointhave drawn up more than four designs for this house starting each one from scratch.
I have drawn up more than four designs for this house starting each one from scratch.
The phrase 'from scratch' is an American colloqualism for 'starting over from zero.'
I am out of my power andhave no control of the project. Now I have another ugly a draft that they expected to me to draw.
I have no control of the project. Now I have another ugly draft that they expect me to draw.
The way you wrote your sentence "I am out of my power" has many, many ways it could be written in American English:
"I feel powerless."
"I am in over my head."
"I don't know what to do."
"My client is out of control. They have brought me yet another ugly 'draft. I can't stand the thought creating a design from it."
I know, that they don't have understanyd aesthetic concepts, but, still, I can't comprehend the reason of why would a person wanted to own a house somethingwhy anyone would want a house like thatis.
I know that they don't understand aesthetics, but, still, I can't comprehend why anyone would want a house like this.
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That sounds so frustrating! Maybe this will be your "When I was just starting out...." story that you tell someday. Good luck!!
UGLY DRAFTS UGLY DRAFTS
This is technically natural, although in most instances all caps is interpreted as yelling.
FI finally I graduated from architecture school and I started to my own company, although I am the only one who is currently working with me.
I finally graduated from architecture school and I started my own company, although I am the only one who is currently working with me.
"I am" is often said/written as "I'm".
It might sound more natural for the second part of the sentence if you rephrased it as, "although I'm currently the only employee".
It is funny when I wroite it like that.
It is funny when I write it like that.
"It is" is often said/written as "It's".
The reason of theI startinged my own company, is that for the first 3 years, the government let us to not pay taxes due to bgives us tax breaks, because we're young entrepreneurs, and I wanted to try my chanceluck.
The reason I started my own company is that for the first 3 years the government gives us tax breaks, because we're young entrepreneurs, and I wanted to try my luck.
Now, I have a house project that is drivesing me crazy.
Now I have a house project that is driving me crazy.
I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client who draws "drafts". I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client who draws "drafts".
I understand what you mean here but it sounds kind of unnatural to me. Instead, you may want to write, "I'm unexplainably angry at my first client because they insist on drawing 'drafts'".
I designed more than 4 house plans over again, starting from zero point.
I designed more than 4 house plans over again, starting from zero.
I a'm out of my verpowered and I have an ugly a draft that they expected to me draw.
I'm overpowered and I have an ugly draft that they expected to me draw.
I know, that they don't have any aesthetic concept but still, I can't comprehend the reason of why would a personwhy a person would wanted to own a house somethingthat looks like that.
I know that they don't have any aesthetic concept but still, I can't comprehend why a person would want to own a house that looks like that.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
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UGLY DRAFTS UGLY DRAFTS UGLY DRAFTS This is technically natural, although in most instances all caps is interpreted as yelling. |
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Finally I graduated from architecture school and I started to my own company although I am the only one who is currently working with me.
"I am" is often said/written as "I'm". It might sound more natural for the second part of the sentence if you rephrased it as, "although I'm currently the only employee".
Finally, I graduated from architecture school The way you wrote the second part 'although I am the only.....working with me' is correct, but not many people would say it that way. |
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It is funny when I wrote like that.
It is funny when I wr "It is" is often said/written as "It's".
(It "(That was a funny sentence.)" "(I chuckled when I wrote that.)" The parentheses indicate that this is an aside, not intended to be part of the main meaning of the paragraph. |
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The reason of the starting my own company, the first 3 years, the government let us to not pay taxes due to be young entrepreneur and I wanted to try my chance.
The reason
It's a rather long sentence, so you might want to consider breaking it up like so: "I started my own company because our government has a program to encourage young entrepreneurs. For the first 3 years after graduation, a business owner will not have to pay taxes." |
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Now, I have a house project that drives me crazy.
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An alternative approach to this paragraph is to start with: "Now, my first client is driving me crazy." |
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I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client who draws "drafts". I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client who draws "drafts". I have a unexplainable anger against to my first client who draws "drafts". I understand what you mean here but it sounds kind of unnatural to me. Instead, you may want to write, "I'm unexplainably angry at my first client because they insist on drawing 'drafts'".
I 'unexplainable anger' might also be translated as 'rage' Another way to say the same thing is: 'I hate the way my first client brings me "drafts" for the design of their house. |
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I designed more than 4 house plan over starting from zero point.
I designed more than 4 house plans over again, starting from
I The phrase 'from scratch' is an American colloqualism for 'starting over from zero.' |
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I am out of my power and I have a ugly a draft that they expected to me draw.
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I The way you wrote your sentence "I am out of my power" has many, many ways it could be written in American English: "I feel powerless." "I am in over my head." "I don't know what to do." "My client is out of control. They have brought me yet another ugly 'draft. I can't stand the thought creating a design from it." |
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I know, they don't have any aesthetic concept but still, I can't comprehend the reason of why would a person wanted to own a house something like that.
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