Hi Tthere, Hi there,

Hi Tthere, Hi there,

I probably should start talking about my three home towns, and my two homelands. I probably should start talking about my three hometowns and my two homelands.

I probably should start by talking about my three home towns, and my two homelands. I probably should start by talking about my three hometowns and my two homelands.

I groew up in Pozuelo, near to Colonia Jardín, in a bubble of wealth in the middle of the city inside awith toxic air pollution due to the near highway close to my house. I grew up in Pozuelo, near Colonia Jardín, in a bubble of wealth in the middle of the city with toxic air pollution due to the highway close to my house.

"Grew up" unless you are still a small child. "Nearby" and "close' are redundant, so you should remove "nearby."

I grow up in Pozuelo, near to Colonia Jardín, in a bubble of wealthn affluent bubble in the middle of the city inside a toxic air due to the near. The air quality was often toxic because the highway was close to my house. I grow up in Pozuelo, near Colonia Jardín, in an affluent bubble in the middle of the city. The air quality was often toxic because the highway was close to my house.

I could say that I hate deeply alldeeply hate the whole area around the place where unfortunately I’m writing these words. I could say that I deeply hate the whole area around the place where unfortunately I’m writing these words.

I could say that I hate deeply all around the place where unfortunately I’m writing these words. I could say that I hate the place where unfortunately I’m writing these words.

As I said, there are other two home towns. As I said, there are other two hometowns.

As I said, there are other two home towns. As I said, there are other two hometowns.

In the summer, I Uusually move temporarily to the coast. In the summer, I usually move temporarily to the coast.

In the summer, I Usually move temporarily to usually spend the summers by the coast. I usually spend the summers by the coast.

This is a more succinct way of saying the same thing.

All my family, as my cousins and so on, have Fflats in an ugly town called Torreblanca. All my family, my cousins and so on, have flats in an ugly town called Torreblanca.

All my family, as members, including my cousins and so on, have Fflats in an ugly town called Torreblanca. All my family members, including my cousins, have flats in an ugly town called Torreblanca.

It is precisely the buildings in ruins eatenconsumed by nature wthat makes this place unique. It is precisely the buildings in ruins consumed by nature that make this place unique.

It is precisely the buildings in ruins eaten by nature wthat makes this place unique. It is precisely the buildings in ruins eaten by nature that make this place unique.

I called it my second home town because of the joy whichthat I had there when I was a child. I called it my second hometown because of the joy that I had there when I was a child.

I called it my second home town because of the joy which I had when I was a childous childhood memories I have from there. I called it my second hometown because of the joyous childhood memories I have from there.

If Torreblanca is warm and sunny, this is freezing, desolating, isolated, not also with a special air, that is all around the place. If Torreblanca is warm and sunny, this is freezing, desolating, isolated, not also with a special air, that is all around the place.

I'm not quite sure what you meant to say in the last part. Depending on your meaning, I would replace "not also without a special air" with: - "but without air pollution" - "also with air pollution"

If Torreblanca is warm and sunny, then this is freezing, desolating, isolated, not also with a special air, that is all around the placee, and isolated. If Torreblanca is warm and sunny, then this is freezing, desolate, and isolated.

Now I'm preparimproving my language skills and preparing certificates to prove my level and have the go tability to go study abroad. Now I'm improving my language skills and preparing certificates to prove my level and have the ability to go study abroad.

Now I'm preparing my language skills and certificates to prove my level and have the gobe able to study abroad. Now I'm preparing my language skills and certificates to prove my level and be able to study abroad.

I know better where I want to study than wha, but I don't know what I want to study. I know where I want to study, but I don't know what I want to study.

I’m choosing between Mmathematics or Bbiology, but who knows… I’m choosing between mathematics or biology, but who knows…

I’m choosing between Mmathematics or Band biology, but who knows… I’m choosing between mathematics and biology, but who knows…

Meanwhile, I like to learn music and play the guitar as a hobby. Meanwhile, I like to learn music and play guitar as a hobby.

I threwhave thrown myself into powerlifting, and have spent a lot of time improving both my body and mind. I have thrown myself into powerlifting and have spent a lot of time improving both my body and mind.

Presumably this continues into the present, so the present perfect or simple present must be used.

I threw myself into powerlifting, and I have spent a lot of time improving both my body and mind. I threw myself into powerlifting, and I have spent a lot of time improving both my body and mind.

I try to read as much as I have the time tomy time allows me. I try to read as much as my time allows me.

This is more elegant.

I try to read as much as I have thcan in my spare time to. I try to read as much as I can in my spare time.

My favourite bBritish TV channel is the BBC for programs and documentaries like the ones narrated by David Attenborough and the TV show called Doctor Who. My favourite British TV channel is the BBC for programs and documentaries like the ones narrated by David Attenborough and the TV show called Doctor Who.

My favourite bBritish TV channel is the BBC for programs and documentaries like the ones narrated by David Attenborough and the TV show called Doctor Who. My favourite British TV channel is the BBC for programs and documentaries like the ones narrated by David Attenborough and the TV show called Doctor Who.