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I haven't written for quite a while, but this is my essay. I haven't written for quite a while, but this is my essay.

Full stop haha.

Humans are complex beings, and history is a proof of that. Humans are complex beings, and history is proof of that.

Humans are complex beings, and our history is a proof of that. Humans are complex beings and our history is proof of that.

Humans are complex beings, and history is a proof of that./ reflects that fact. Humans are complex beings, and history is a proof of that/ reflects that fact.

Alternate expression.

Ambition and desire usually hasve driven wars and conflicts, even though peace is more beneficial for humankind. Ambition and desire usually have driven wars and conflicts, even though peace is more beneficial for humankind.

"to have" takes into account ambition and desire so it is plural

Ambition and desire usually has drivenhas caused wars and conflicts, even though peace is more beneficial for humankind. Ambition and desire has caused wars and conflicts even though peace is more beneficial for humankind.

Ambition and desire are usually hasthe drivening factors of wars and conflicts, even though peace is more beneficial for humankind./ even though peace is what I feel humankind ought to be seeking. Ambition and desire are usually the driving factors of wars and conflicts, even though peace is more beneficial for humankind/ even though peace is what I feel humankind ought to be seeking.

Whether or not people that never feeling satisfied is good or not haves been a subject of recent public debate. Whether people that never feel satisfied is good or not has been a subject of recent public debate.

This sentence is very vague and confusing. I would rather say something like: Whether or not people should be ambitious has been a subject of recent debate. I suggest to make your sentence more clear and specific.

Whether or not people never feeling satisfied is good or not haves been a subject of recent public debate. Whether or not people never feeling satisfied is good or not has been a subject of recent public debate.

Whether or not people never feeling satisfied is good or not havehas been athe subject of recent public debate. Whether or not people feel satisfied has been the subject of recent public debate.

I didn’t understand

Whether or not people never feeling satisfied is good or not haves been a subject of recent public debate. Whether or not people never feeling satisfied is good or not has been a subject of recent public debate.

This essay will discuss some advantages and disadvantages of thathaving that kind of feeling. This essay will discuss some advantages and disadvantages of having that kind of feeling.

Firstly, one good thingbenefit about never feeling satisfied is that people can search for better opportunities, which may increases their chances of achieving highetheir goals. Firstly, one benefit about never feeling satisfied is that people can search for better opportunities, which may increase their chance of achieving their goals.

Firstly, one good thing about never feeling satisfied is that people search for better opportunities, which increases their chances of achieving higher goals. Firstly, one good thing about never feeling satisfied is that people search for better opportunities, which increases their chances of achieving higher goals.

People who are frequently unhappy with their lifeves typically put themselves out of their comfort zone to find better opportunities. People who are frequently unhappy with their lives typically put themselves out of their comfort zone to find better opportunities.

People who are frequently unhappy with their life typically put/ place themselves out of their comfort zone to find better and more opportunities. People who are frequently unhappy with their life typically put/ place themselves out of their comfort zone to find better and more opportunities.

Although traveling to another country is risky, many young people do it just for the chance of gettachieving a better life there. Although traveling to another country is risky, many young people do it just for the chance of achieving a better life there.

Although traveling to another country is risky, many young people do it just for the chance of gettin an effort gaing a better life there. Although traveling to another country is risky, many young people do it in an effort gain a better life there.

The previous sentence is ok, but perhaps this way could be good too.

They often find a lack of opportunities at home which make them unhappier. They often find a lack of opportunities at home which make them unhappier.

They often find lack of opportunities at home, which makes them unhappier. They often find lack of opportunities at home, which makes them unhappier.

They often find the lack of opportunities at home which makes them unhappier. They often find the lack of opportunities at home makes them unhappier.

They often find lack of opportunities at home, which make them unhappier. They often lack opportunities at home, which make them unhappier.

Secondly, never feeling fulfilled allows people to be open to change for getresulting in better results. Secondly, never feeling fulfilled allows people to be open to change resulting in better results.

fulfill must be in the past tense when it is an adjective. "Resulting in" flows a little better.

Secondly, never feeling fulfilled allows people to be open to change for gettingin order to get better results. Secondly, never feeling fulfilled allows people to be open to change in order to get better results.

Secondly, never feeling fulfilled allows people to be open to change for getting better results. Secondly, never feeling fulfilled allows people to be open to change for getting better results.

Secondly, never feeling fulfilled/ their lives are enough allows people to be open to change for getting/ to achieve better results. Secondly, never feeling fulfilled/ their lives are enough allows people to be open to change for getting/ to achieve better results.

That is especially evident during the learning process. That is especially evident during the learning process.

That is especially evident during the learning process. That is especially evident during the learning process.

When students do not feel satisfied with their current knowledge, they seek for better ways to learn more advance topics. When students do not feel satisfied with their current knowledge, they seek ways to learn more advance topics.

When students do not feel satisfied with their current knowledge, they seek for better ways to learn more advanced topics. When students do not feel satisfied with their current knowledge, they seek for better ways to learn more advanced topics.

That require new ways of learning and prerform better. That require new ways of learning and perform better.

Thatis requires new ways of learning and preto perform better. This requires new ways of learning to perform better.

Thatey will require new ways of learning andto preform better. They will require new ways of learning to preform better.

That requires new ways/ methods of learning and preform better.in order to perform better or achieve great heights for themselves. That requires new ways/ methods of learning in order to perform better or achieve great heights for themselves.

In spite of the good thingbenefits, continuous dissatisfaction can lead to metal problems such a depression and anxiety. In spite of the benefits, continuous dissatisfaction can lead to metal problems such a depression and anxiety.

"Benefit(s)" is a word that sounds a little more appropriate than "good things", especially in an essay context. It is not necessary, but something that makes you sound more knowledgeable.

In spite of thall these good things, continuous dissatisfaction can lead to mental problems, such as depression andor anxiety. In spite of all these good things, continuous dissatisfaction can lead to mental problems, such as depression or anxiety.

In spite of the good things,is, the continuous dissatisfaction can lead to metal problems such as depression and anxiety. In spite of this, the continuous dissatisfaction can lead to metal problems such as depression and anxiety.

In spite of the good things, continuous dissatisfaction can lead to mental problem-related problems/ issues such a depression and anxiety. In spite of the good things, continuous dissatisfaction can lead to mental-related problems/ issues such a depression and anxiety.

However, these can be tremitigated with therapy, to lower the expectations one might have of their life. However, these can be mitigated with therapy, to lower the expectations one might have of their life.

However, these can be treated with therapy to help lower expectations. However, these can be treated with therapy to help lower expectations.

In conclusion, never feeling satisfied haves more good things than bad. In conclusion, never feeling satisfied has more good things than bad.

In this case, the subject is "never feeling satisfied", which is a singular idea, so it must be conjugated in third person singular (has).

In conclusion, never feeling satisfied haves more goodpositive things than badit does negative. In conclusion, never feeling satisfied has more positive things than it does negative.

"Positive" and "Negative" are more professional/specific than "good" and "bad" are, so be sure to use them within your essays!

In conclusion, never feeling satisfied havmay cause more good things than bad. In conclusion, never feeling satisfied may cause more good things than bad.

In conclusion, I feel never feeling satisfied havebrings more good things than bad. In conclusion, I feel never feeling satisfied brings more good than bad.

It leads people to search for better opportunities and bemakes them open to changes, even though in some extreme cases it can cause mental issues such as depression and anxiety. It leads people to search for better opportunities and makes them open to changes even though in some extreme cases it can cause mental issues.

However, this bad situation can be avoided with therapy.

Adding this is a bit redundant, since you mentioned this exact phrase already.

However, thise bad situation can be avoidcan be prevented with therapy. However, the bad can be prevented with therapy.