Jan. 13, 2021
What I loved more than anything else was my Barbie doll. I was captivated by it. I think every girl had a period in their childhood that they wouldn’t let go of their favourite doll. So did I. If my memory severs me good, my doll had a lovely complexion, oval face, upturned nose and hazel eye. She also had a slim figure, a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length hair in ginger color. I used to keep her immaculately groomed. I used to tailor clothes and build house for her. I also played make-up games with my big sister since she also had a doll. We put them together and make up some stories. I was obsessed with this pretend game. Most of all, I think it was a good way to relax after school to find peace and it was also a good way to strengthen the family bond between me and my big sister who is still one of my best friends now.
What I loved more than anything elseDuring my childhood, what I loved the most was my Barbie doll.
During my childhood, what I loved the most was my Barbie doll.
I was captivated by it.
I think every girl had a period in their childhood thatwhen they wouldn’t let go ofgive up their favourite doll.
I think every girl had a period in their childhood when they wouldn’t give up their favourite doll.
The american spelling of favourite is favorite.
So did I.
If my memory servers me goodwell, my doll had a lovely complexion, an oval-shaped face, an upturned nose and hazel eyes.
If my memory serves me well, my doll had a lovely complexion, an oval-shaped face, an upturned nose and hazel eyes.
She also had a slim figure, a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length hair in ginger color.
She also had a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length hair in ginger color.
slim figure and slender waist are almost redundant.
I used to keep her immaculately groomed.
I used to tailosew her clothes and even buildt a house for her.
I used to sew her clothes and even built a house for her.
I also played make-upbelieve games with my bigolder sister since she also had a doll.
I also played make-believe games with my older sister since she also had a doll.
Make-up represents the stuff you put on your face, like lipsticks, eyeshadows, foundations, mascaras, etc. I think you meant to say "make-believe" or "pretend" games. Also, I substituted "big" sister for older sister, since "big" sister may be construed that your sister is fat.
We putlayed with them together and makde up some stories.
We played with them together and made up some stories.
I was obsessed with this pretend game.
MBut most of all, I think it was a good way to relax after school, to find peace, and it was also a good way to strengthen the family bond between me and my big sister, who incidentally is still one of my best friends now.
But most of all, I think it was a good way to relax after school, to find peace, and to strengthen the bond between me and my sister, who incidentally is still one of my best friends.
A toy I liked in my childhood
What I loved more than anything else was my Barbie doll.
I was captivated by it.
I think every girl hads a period in their childhood that they wouldn’t let go of their favourite doll.
I think every girl has a period in their childhood that they wouldn’t let go of their favourite doll.
SoAs did I.
As did I.
Consider "Just like me."
If my memory severs me goodwell, my doll had a lovely complexion, oval face, upturned nose and hazel eyes.
If my memory severs me well, my doll had a lovely complexion, oval face, upturned nose and hazel eyes.
She also had a slim figure, a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length hair in ginger colohair.
She also had a slim figure, a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length ginger hair.
I used to keep her immaculately groomed.
I used to tailor clothes and buildmaintain a house for her.
I used to tailor clothes and maintain a house for her.
"build a house" is about construction; it's usually a one-off event (once the house is built, it's "done").
I also played makde-up games with my big sister since she also had a doll.
I also played made-up games with my big sister since she also had a doll.
"make-up" here suggests cosmetics (lipstick, eyeliner, etc.)
We put'd play with them together and would make up some stories.
We'd play with them together and would make up some stories.
I was obsessed with this pretend game.
Most of all, I think it was a good way to relax after school to find peacend find peace after school, and it was also a goodn effective way to strengthen the family bond between me and my big sister who is still one of my best friends nowto this day.
Most of all, I think it was a good way to relax and find peace after school, and it was also an effective way to strengthen the family bond between me and my big sister who is still one of my best friends to this day.
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I think every girl had a period in their childhood that they wouldn’t let go of their favourite doll.
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I think every girl had a period in their childhood The american spelling of favourite is favorite. |
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So did I.
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If my memory severs me good, my doll had a lovely complexion, oval face, upturned nose and hazel eye.
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She also had a slim figure, a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length hair in ginger color.
She also had a slim figure, a slender waist and sleek shoulder-length
She also had slim figure and slender waist are almost redundant. |
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I used to tailor clothes and build house for her.
I used to tailor clothes and "build a house" is about construction; it's usually a one-off event (once the house is built, it's "done").
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I also played make-up games with my big sister since she also had a doll.
I also played ma "make-up" here suggests cosmetics (lipstick, eyeliner, etc.)
I also played make- Make-up represents the stuff you put on your face, like lipsticks, eyeshadows, foundations, mascaras, etc. I think you meant to say "make-believe" or "pretend" games. Also, I substituted "big" sister for older sister, since "big" sister may be construed that your sister is fat. |
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We put them together and make up some stories.
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I was obsessed with this pretend game. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most of all, I think it was a good way to relax after school to find peace and it was also a good way to strengthen the family bond between me and my big sister who is still one of my best friends now.
Most of all, I think it was a good way to relax a
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