Sept. 21, 2022
I am very lucky because I have the beach close to home. This summer, a lot of days I was walking by the beach. I like stroll by water, and playing with the waves. When I go alone, seldom take a bath, just I walk. But when I go with my wife or with friends, then, always take a bath. Usually, I don't stay very time taking the sun, one or two hours is enought for me.
I am very lucky because I have thea beach close to home.
I am very lucky because I have a beach close to home.
More natural sounding to say "a"
This summer, a lot of days I wasI often walkinged by the beach.
This summer, I often walked by the beach.
I like to stroll by the water, and play with the waves. (Or "I like strolling by the water, and playing with the waves.") I like to stroll by the water, and play with the waves. (Or "I like strolling by the water, and playing with the waves.")
When I go alone, I seldom take a bathe, just I walk.
When I go alone, I seldom bathe, just I walk.
But when I go with my wife or with friends, then, I always take a bathbathe in the water.
But when I go with my wife or with friends, then I always bathe in the water.
"Take a bath" implies like in the bathroom, you're cleaning yourself. You could say bathing in the water :)
Usually, I don't stay very time taklong ing the sun, one or two hours is enought for me.
Usually, I don't stay very long in the sun, one or two hours is enough for me.
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Great work!
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Walking on the Beach
This is assuming you're at the beach and not walking around it.
I am very lucky because Ito have the beach close to my home.
I am very lucky to have the beach close to my home.
I feel like this is more of a preference thing. "Lucky to have" is a common phrase.
This summer, a lot of days I wasI spent most of my time walking by the beach.
This summer, I spent most of my time walking by the beach.
I like stroll by the water, and playing with the waves.
I like stroll by the water and play with the waves.
When I go alone, seldomI rarely take a bath,. I just I walk.
When I go alone, I rarely take a bath. I just walk.
Does "take a bath" mean to go into the ocean?
But when I go with my wife or withmy friends, then,I always take a bath.
But when I go with my wife or my friends, I always take a bath.
Usually, I don't stay very time taking the sun, opend a lot of time sunbathing. One or two hours is enought for me.
Usually, I don't spend a lot of time sunbathing. One or two hours is enough for me.
Run-on sentence. Also, I think "taking the sun" means "sunbathing" here (as in, lying down to enjoy the sun's rays)?
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There were some grammatical issues, and I changed some things for stylistic reasons, but there was only one spelling error. Good job!
I am very lucky because I have the beach close to home.
This summer, a lot of days I was walking by the beachI walked along the beach a lot this summer.
I walked along the beach a lot this summer.
I like to stroll by the water, and playing with the waves.
I like to stroll by the water and play with the waves.
When I go alone, I seldom take a bath,get in the water. I just I walk.
When I go alone, I seldom get in the water. I just walk.
"Take a bath" is only used when getting in the water to clean yourself. If it is just for fun like when you are at the beach, "get in the water" is the correct way to say it.
But when I go with my wife or with friends, then, I always take a bathget in the water.
But when I go with my wife or with friends then I always get in the water.
Usually, I don't stay very time taking the sun, o very long. One or two hours is enought for me.
Usually, I don't stay in the sun very long. One or two hours is enough for me.
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Very good! Be careful with commas. You overused them quite a bit here.
I am very lucky because I have the beach close to home.
This summer, a lot of days I wasere were many days this summer that I went walking byalong the beach.
There were many days this summer that I went walking along the beach.
I like to (go for/take) a stroll by the water, and playing with the waves.
I like to (go for/take) a stroll by the water and play with the waves.
When I go alone, seldom take a bath,I seldom get in the water when I go alone. I just I walk.
I seldom get in the water when I go alone. I just walk.
But I always get in when I go with my wife or with friends, then, always take a bath.
But I always get in when I go with my wife or with friends.
Usually, I don't stay out very time taklong ing the sun, one or two hours is enought for me.
Usually I don't stay out very long in the sun, one or two hours is enough for me.
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Nice job!
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Strolls by the Beach
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I am very lucky because I have the beach close to home. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I am very lucky I feel like this is more of a preference thing. "Lucky to have" is a common phrase.
I am very lucky because I have More natural sounding to say "a" |
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This summer, a lot of days I was walking by the beach.
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This summer,
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I like stroll by water, and playing with the waves.
I like to (go for/take) a stroll by the water
I like to stroll by the water
I like stroll by the water I like to stroll by the water, and play with the waves. (Or "I like strolling by the water, and playing with the waves.") I like to stroll by the water, and play with the waves. (Or "I like strolling by the water, and playing with the waves.") |
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When I go alone, seldom take a bath, just I walk.
When I go alone, I seldom "Take a bath" is only used when getting in the water to clean yourself. If it is just for fun like when you are at the beach, "get in the water" is the correct way to say it.
When I go alone, Does "take a bath" mean to go into the ocean?
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But when I go with my wife or with friends, then, always take a bath.
But I always get in when I go with my wife or with friends
But when I go with my wife or with friends
But when I go with my wife or
But when I go with my wife or with friends, then "Take a bath" implies like in the bathroom, you're cleaning yourself. You could say bathing in the water :) |
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Usually, I don't stay very time taking the sun, one or two hours is enought for me.
Usually
Usually, I don't stay
Usually, I don't s Run-on sentence. Also, I think "taking the sun" means "sunbathing" here (as in, lying down to enjoy the sun's rays)?
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