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Yesterday was Saturday, so I thought the library would be crowded. Yesterday was Saturday, so I thought the library would be crowded.

Because it's a common speech pattern, using "I thought" here sounds like you're leading up to a statement that refutes your assumption. Ie. "I thought the library would be crowded, but when I got there, there was hardly anyone there." Alternatively you could say "I figured the library would be crowded" or "I expected the library to be crowded" which sounds more neutral to me.

When I geot there, the situation was the same as I thoughtexpected. When I got there, the situation was the same as I expected.

Could also be said as "...was just as I expected"

When I geot there, the situation was the same as I thought. When I got there, the situation was as I thought.

When I geot there, the situation was the same as I thought. When I got there, the situation was the same as I thought.

More simply: "the situation was as I expected"

I wanted to use the library catalog system, but there were so many people searching for the books they wanted. I wanted to use the library catalog system, but there were so many people searching for the books they wanted.

I wanted to use the library catalog system, but there were so many people searching for the books they wanted. I wanted to use the library catalog system, but there were so many people searching for the books they wanted.

This would sound better as follows to avoid repetiticion: I wanted to use the library catalog system, but there were so many people using it to search for books.

I waited for a long time, but my turn never came, so I gave up, and decided to fouind them by myself. I waited for a long time, but my turn never came, so I gave up, and decided to find them by myself.

I waited for a long time, but my turn never came, so I gave up, and decided to fouind them by myself. I waited for a long time, but my turn never came, so I gave up and decided to find them by myself.

I waited for a long time, but my turn never came, so I gave up, and decided to foundsearch for them by myself. I waited for a long time, but my turn never came, so I gave up and decided to search for them by myself.

Finally, I borrowedwas able to check out three books. Finally, I was able to check out three books.

Original is grammatical, but this sounds more natural

One is a science fiction novel, another is a coming-of-age book, and the third one is about human healing stories collection of stories about people being healed. One is a science fiction novel, another is a coming-of-age book, and the third one is a collection of stories about people being healed.

I think this is what was meant by "human healing stories"

One is a science fiction novel, another is a coming-of-age book, and the third one is about human healing stories. One is a science fiction novel, another is a coming-of-age book, and the third one is about human healing stories.

I'm going to trying to finish reading these books in Aprilthis month. I'm going to try to finish reading these books this month.

"trying to" sounds like you're in the middle of the process. Since you only just checked out the books, it sounds better to saying "I'm going to try" When referring to the current month, it's better say "this month" than the name of the month