Crossfit: a great sports mixture of sports Crossfit: a great mixture of sports

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Crossfit is a relativefairly new way tof working out. Crossfit is a fairly new way of working out.

I discovered it around five years ago, although I was attracted to it, I didn't begin to practise it until three years later. I discovered it around five years ago, although I was attracted to it, I didn't begin to practise it until three years later.

because five years ago is in the past you need to use discover in the past tense.

I discovered it around five years ago, a. Although I was attractedinterested in it, I didn't begin to practise it until three years later. I discovered it around five years ago. Although I was interested in it, I didn't begin to practise until three years later.

discover- presente, discovered- pasado

At first, it was pretty difficult because Crossfit is comprised of exercises whighly demandingch are highly technically demanding . At first, it was pretty difficult because Crossfit is comprised of exercises which are highly technically demanding .

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At first, it was pretty difficult because Crossfit comprisensists of exercises which are highly demanding technically. At first, it was pretty difficult because Crossfit consists of exercises which are highly demanding.

Even so, its combination of weightlifting, gymnastic and calisthenic combinations made me fall in love with it. Even so, its combination of weightlifting, gymnastic and calisthenics made me fall in love with it.

This word order is more natural

Even so, itsthe combination of weightlifting, gymnastics and calisthenic combinations made me fall in love with it. Even so, the combination of weightlifting, gymnastics and calisthenics made me fall in love with it.

WhileEven though it's a tough sport, I really recommend anyone to give it a tryshot. Even though it's a tough sport, I really recommend anyone to give it a shot.

(try) is correct, however, if you want to use a popular indiom/expression you could use shot instead. To give something a shot means to try something.

It's a very amusingfun activity and trainers assist you to adapt the training tofor any age andor condition. It's a very fun activity and trainers assist you to adapt the training for any age or condition.

In english amusing is normally used to mean funny. Because crossfit is not funny but it is fun, fun is a better word to use.

It's a very amusingfun activity and trainers assist yo to adapt the training to any age and conditionu in adjusting the training regime to your age and fitness level. It's a very fun activity and trainers assist you in adjusting the training regime to your age and fitness level.

If you're going go to the gym switch from machineries to dumbells, rigtht now! If you go to the gym switch from machines to dumbells, right now!

If you're going to the gym, switch from machineries (?) to dumbells, rigtht now! If you're going to the gym, switch from machineries (?) to dumbells right now!